Language— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答不够清晰，表达混乱且有重复，缺乏连贯性。建议简洁明了地列出会说的语言，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: I can speak three languages. My native language is Chinese, which I use every day. I have also learned English for a long time and can speak it fairly well. Additionally, I can speak some Japanese.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点，使用正确的语法和连接词，具体说明学习语言的困难。

Exemplo: I think learning a new language is difficult because some words sound similar to my native language, which sometimes confuses me. Also, understanding spoken language can be challenging at first.

Sugestão: 回答表达有重复且未完整，建议避免重复词汇，完整表达理由，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I want to learn French in the future because I plan to travel to France and enjoy its beautiful scenery. Moreover, some of my friends study at universities there, which motivates me to learn quickly. I believe learning French will help me communicate better during my trip.

Sugestão: 回答较完整，但语法和表达稍显简单。建议使用更多连接词和丰富词汇，使表达更自然流畅。

Exemplo: I have been learning English since primary school because it is a compulsory subject and included in all my important exams. At first, I found it difficult and unfamiliar, so I didn't like it. However, later I realized that English is very useful for communicating with people worldwide.

× Overall, I can speak three kinds of languages for Chinese.

✓ Overall, I can speak three kinds of languages including Chinese.

这里的表达不清楚，'three kinds of languages for Chinese'不符合英语习惯，应改为'including Chinese'来表达包含中文的三种语言。

× My native language is Chinese, which I use every day, so I I am fluent in speaking Chinese, and I can't speak English either because I have learned English for a long time.

✓ My native language is Chinese, which I use every day, so I am fluent in speaking Chinese, but I can't speak English well even though I have learned it for a long time.

句中使用了重复的'I'，且连接词使用不当，'and'连接的内容与前文逻辑不符，应使用'but'表示转折。

× What's more, I can also speak Chinese, Japanese, but I.

✓ What's more, I can also speak Japanese.

句子结构不完整，'but I'后面缺少内容，应删除多余部分使句子完整。

× For example when I learn English, I find some English words is pronunciation are similar with the Chinese word.

✓ For example, when I learn English, I find some English words' pronunciations are similar to Chinese words.

'words is pronunciation are'结构混乱，'words'为复数，谓语应为'are'，且'pronunciation'应为复数形式'pronunciations'，并且介词应为'similar to'。

× So I sometimes mix recognize them and don't understand them and poor eyes listening.

✓ So I sometimes confuse them and don't understand them well when listening.

'mix recognize'用法错误，应使用'confuse'；'poor eyes listening'表达不清，应改为'listen well'或'understand well when listening'。

× If someone.

✓ （此句不完整，建议删除或补充完整）

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，无法表达完整意思。

× Yes, I want to learn French in the future because I plan to travel to French France and enjoy the scenery there What's more, some of my friends are studying at universities in France, which motivates me to improve improve quickly.

✓ Yes, I want to learn French in the future because I plan to travel to France and enjoy the scenery there. What's more, some of my friends are studying at universities in France, which motivates me to improve quickly.

'French France'重复，应该只用'France'；'improve improve'重复，应删除多余部分。

× I think learning learning this language can help me communicate better and.

✓ I think learning this language can help me communicate better.

'learning learning'重复，应删除多余部分；句子末尾不完整，应去掉多余的'and'。

× I have been learning English since I entered primary school because it is a compulsory subject and all my importance examinations include English.

✓ I have been learning English since I entered primary school because it is a compulsory subject and all my important examinations include English.

'importance examinations'用词错误，应为'adjective + noun'结构，正确为'important examinations'。

× At first I didn't like this language because I find it is hard to understand and I am not familiar with it, but later I find English is useful for communicating with people around the world.

✓ At first I didn't like this language because I found it hard to understand and I was not familiar with it, but later I found English is useful for communicating with people around the world.

描述过去的感受和经历，动词时态应使用过去时，'find'应改为'found'，'am'改为'was'。