Part 1
Examinador
What languages can you speak?
Candidato
In my daily life, I usually speak Chinese to others. It's my mother language and and sometimes I also use English in my exam but I'm not good at speaking.
Examinador
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Candidato
Yes, I've encountered many difficulties in learning English because in our traditional teacher we focus on writing and doing some exercise, so we neglect speaking. But I want to improve my English skills in the future.
Examinador
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Candidato
Yes, I'm looking forward to learn a new language like Korean because I. I'm interested in Korean culture and I want to I can speak fluently in the future.
Examinador
Why do you learn English?
Candidato
To be honest, one of the main reason to learn English is I want to study abroad. So I have to learn English, especially speaking. It's a way to communicate with each others. So it's essential for me to learn it.
What languages can you speak?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误,建议简洁明了地表达,同时注意语法准确性。可以用更自然的表达方式介绍你会说的语言。
Exemplo: I usually speak Chinese, which is my native language. I also use English occasionally, especially during exams, but I'm still working on improving my speaking skills.
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答中表达不够流畅,语法和用词有误。建议使用连贯的句子,并用连接词使表达更自然。
Exemplo: Yes, learning English has been challenging for me because traditional teaching methods focus mainly on writing and exercises, neglecting speaking practice. However, I am determined to improve my English skills in the future.
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和不完整的句子,建议注意句子结构完整,避免重复,并用连接词使表达更连贯。
Exemplo: Yes, I look forward to learning a new language like Korean because I am interested in Korean culture, and I hope to speak it fluently in the future.
Why do you learn English?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和重复,建议用更准确的表达方式,并避免重复,使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Exemplo: To be honest, one of the main reasons I learn English is because I want to study abroad. Therefore, I need to improve my speaking skills since English is essential for communication.
× It's my mother language and and sometimes I also use English in my exam but I'm not good at speaking.
✓ It's my mother tongue and sometimes I also use English in my exam but I'm not good at speaking.
“mother language”应改为“mother tongue”,因为“mother tongue”是固定搭配,表示母语。
× It's my mother language and and sometimes I also use English in my exam but I'm not good at speaking.
✓ It's my mother tongue and sometimes I also use English in my exam, but I'm not good at speaking.
句中“and and”重复,应去掉一个“and”;另外,连接两个独立分句时,逗号应放在“but”前。
× Yes, I've encountered many difficulties in learning English because in our traditional teacher we focus on writing and doing some exercise, so we neglect speaking.
✓ Yes, I've encountered many difficulties in learning English because in our traditional teaching, we focus on writing and doing some exercises, so we neglect speaking.
“in our traditional teacher”应改为“in our traditional teaching”,因为这里指的是教学方式;“exercise”应为复数“exercises”,表示多项练习。
× Yes, I'm looking forward to learn a new language like Korean because I.
✓ Yes, I'm looking forward to learning a new language like Korean because I am interested in Korean culture.
“look forward to”后应接动名词形式“learning”,而不是动词原形“learn”。
× Yes, I'm looking forward to learn a new language like Korean because I. I'm interested in Korean culture and I want to I can speak fluently in the future.
✓ Yes, I'm looking forward to learning a new language like Korean because I am interested in Korean culture and I want to be able to speak fluently in the future.
句子结构不完整且重复,应补全并调整为正确表达。
× To be honest, one of the main reason to learn English is I want to study abroad.
✓ To be honest, one of the main reasons to learn English is that I want to study abroad.
“one of the main reason”应为“one of the main reasons”,因为“one of”后面接复数名词。
× It's a way to communicate with each others.
✓ It's a way to communicate with each other.
“each others”错误,正确用法是“each other”,表示彼此。