Language— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and then add a specific detail to support it, using linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I speak Cantonese, which is my mother tongue since I was born and raised in Hong Kong. Because Cantonese is the native language there, I have spoken it all my life.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to explain your opinion in more detail.

Exemplo: Definitely, learning a new language can be very challenging, especially if you have no prior exposure to it. For instance, without any experience, it becomes much harder to understand grammar and vocabulary.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but could be more natural by avoiding repetition and improving sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I plan to learn Japanese and Korean later this year because I want to communicate fluently with speakers of these languages. Therefore, I will focus mainly on improving my speaking skills.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar and vocabulary relevant to the context.

Exemplo: English is essential nowadays because many people around the world speak it. Therefore, learning English helps me connect and communicate with people globally.

× I speak Cantonese and this is my mother language.

✓ I speak Cantonese and this is my mother tongue.

The phrase 'mother language' is incorrect; the correct term is 'mother tongue' when referring to one's native language.

× so eventually I speak Cantonese.

✓ so eventually I speak Cantonese fluently.

The sentence is grammatically correct but lacks clarity. Adding 'fluently' clarifies the meaning and improves the sentence.

× especially if you are learning new languages without any exposure or experience of it before.

✓ especially if you are learning new languages without any exposure to or experience with them before.

The prepositions 'of' and the pronoun 'it' are incorrect here. The correct prepositions are 'to' and 'with' when referring to exposure and experience, and 'them' should be used to refer to 'languages' (plural).

× You will find it 10 times difficult to learn it.

✓ You will find it ten times more difficult to learn.

The phrase '10 times difficult' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'ten times more difficult'. Also, 'to learn it' is redundant after 'difficult to learn'.

× Yes, actually I'm planning to learn Japanese and Korean at the end of this year so that I can communicate with other people with these two languages fluently.

✓ Yes, actually I'm planning to learn Japanese and Korean at the end of this year so that I can communicate fluently with other people in these two languages.

The phrase 'with these two languages fluently' is awkward. The correct preposition is 'in' when referring to languages, and 'fluently' should be placed before 'with other people' for clarity.

× I think I'll focus on Speaking of these two languages.

✓ I think I'll focus on speaking these two languages.

The phrase 'focus on Speaking of' is incorrect. The correct form is 'focus on speaking' without 'of'. Also, 'speaking' should not be capitalised here.

× English is since necessity for you to come.

✓ English is a necessary language for you to learn.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Since necessity' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a necessary language'. Also, 'for you to come' is unclear and replaced with 'for you to learn' to make sense.

× Due to the large population that speak English, I think learning English will be an effective way for me to get touch with people around the world.

✓ Due to the large population that speaks English, I think learning English will be an effective way for me to get in touch with people around the world.

The subject 'population' is singular, so the verb should be 'speaks' (third person singular). Also, the phrase 'get touch with' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'get in touch with'.