Language— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and fix tense and article errors. Add a short specific detail using a linking word. For example, mention where you use each language.

Exemplo: I speak English and my mother tongue, Malayalam. I have studied English since childhood, so I use it at school and work, whereas I speak Malayalam at home and with relatives.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words and grammar mistakes. Give a clear reason with linking words and specific examples rather than vague statements. Use correct subject-verb agreement and smoother phrasing.

Exemplo: Yes, I think learning a new language can be difficult because grammar rules and pronunciation differ. For example, learning tones in Mandarin or verb conjugations in Spanish can be challenging for English speakers.

Sugestão: Make the response more natural by using present or future simple correctly and adding a specific language or plan. Use linking words to explain reasons and avoid vague phrases like 'very much'.

Exemplo: Yes, I definitely plan to learn more languages in the future. For instance, I hope to study Spanish because, by learning it, I can better understand Spanish-speaking cultures and communicate while travelling.

Sugestão: Use a clear topic sentence and correct factual phrasing. Avoid absolute claims (not most countries). Give a personal reason and a supporting example with linking words.

Exemplo: I learn English because it helps me communicate with people from many countries and access information. For example, knowing English makes it easier for me to study online and talk to international colleagues.

× I speak English and my mother tongue Malayalam.

✓ I speak English and my mother tongue is Malayalam.

The original sentence lacks a verb linking 'my mother tongue Malayalam' to the subject. Use the verb 'is' (present simple) to state a fact about the subject. Suggestion: add the linking verb after the subject when describing identity or attributes.

× I learned English since from my childhood but my mother tongue is Malayalam.

✓ I have learned English since my childhood, but my mother tongue is Malayalam.

The phrase 'since my childhood' requires the present perfect tense to show an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Remove the extra word 'from' after 'since.' Use 'have learned' for correct tense. Suggestion: use present perfect with 'since' + time point.

× I am comfortable speaking Malayalam fluently.

✓ I am comfortable speaking Malayalam fluently.

This sentence is grammatically correct. 'Speaking' is correctly used as a gerund after 'comfortable.' No change needed.

× Yes, definitely I think so.

✓ Yes, definitely.

The phrase 'Yes, definitely I think so' is redundant and slightly awkward. For a concise spoken response, 'Yes, definitely' is clearer. If keeping 'I think so', place it separately: 'Yes, I think so.' Suggestion: avoid redundancy in short spoken answers.

× It is very hard to learn new languages.

✓ It is very hard to learn new languages.

This sentence is grammatically correct. The present simple correctly expresses a general truth. No change needed.

× Each language are hard to uh, learn as a new since the rules in each language are different.

✓ Each language is hard to learn as a new one, since the rules in each language are different.

The subject 'Each language' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are' (subject-verb agreement). Remove filler 'uh' and add 'one' after 'new' for clarity. Also reorder to eliminate awkward phrasing. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with singular 'each' and avoid fillers in formal answers.

× Definitely I would learn new languages in the future.

✓ I will definitely learn new languages in the future.

For a planned intention in the future, 'will' or 'be going to' is preferred. 'Would' is conditional and implies uncertainty or depends on conditions. Place adverb 'definitely' after subject or before main verb for natural word order. Suggestion: use 'will' for firm future intentions.

× By learning new languages, I could know more about different cultures.

✓ By learning new languages, I can know more about different cultures.

'Could' suggests a possibility or hypothetical; 'can' indicates a present ability or general truth resulting from the action. Since the speaker means that learning languages enables them to know more, use 'can.' Suggestion: choose 'can' for general statements about capability, 'could' for hypothetical or past ability.

× It is very much essential to learn new cultures and traditions.

✓ It is essential to learn about new cultures and traditions.

'Very much essential' is awkward and unidiomatic; 'essential' already conveys necessity. Use 'very' + adjective (very important) or simply 'essential.' Also use the preposition 'about' with 'learn' when acquiring knowledge of cultures. Suggestion: avoid stacking intensifiers and use correct prepositions.

× By learning English we could communicate with most of the people on the earth, since in most countries the official language is English, so it is convenient.

✓ By learning English, we can communicate with most people in the world, since English is an official language in many countries, so it is convenient.

Multiple issues: 'we could' is better as 'we can' for general ability; 'most of the people on the earth' is wordy and unidiomatic — use 'most people in the world'; 'in most countries the official language is English' is incorrect because English is not the official language in most countries; better to say 'English is an official language in many countries.' Also add commas and remove redundant 'so'. Suggestion: use concise idiomatic expressions and accurate factual qualifiers ('many' instead of 'most').