Birthday— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by saying, "I usually go to the cinema to watch a movie with my friends and family on my birthday." Also, avoid repeating phrases like "I prefer" twice; use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I usually go to the cinema to watch a movie with my friends and family on my birthday because I enjoy spending quality time with them.

Sugestão: Make your answer clearer and more coherent by structuring it properly. Use linking words like "and" or "so" to connect ideas. For example, say, "When I was a child, I used to go to school on my birthday and give chocolates to my friends, which made me very happy." Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors.

Exemplo: When I was a child, I used to go to school on my birthday and give chocolates to my friends, which made the day very enjoyable for all of us.

Sugestão: Improve your answer by making it more natural and avoiding repetition. For example, say, "Yes, celebrating my birthday is important because it makes me feel special and gives me a chance to meet my loved ones." Use linking words like "because" to explain reasons clearly.

Exemplo: Yes, celebrating my birthday is important because it makes me feel special and gives me a chance to meet my loved ones.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to say, "In China, I think my mother's birthday is the most important to celebrate because I love her very much. Sometimes, I bake a cake to make her day special." Use linking words like "because" and "sometimes" to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: In China, I think my mother's birthday is the most important to celebrate because I love her very much. Sometimes, I bake a cake to make her day special.

× On my birthday, I prefer to go cinema for watching movie and I prefer to go with my friends and family members.

✓ On my birthday, I prefer to go to the cinema to watch a movie and I prefer to go with my friends and family members.

The preposition 'to' is required after 'go' when referring to a place like 'cinema'. Also, 'for watching movie' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to watch a movie' because 'to' is used before the base form of the verb to express purpose.

× On my birthday, I prefer to go cinema for watching movie and I prefer to go with my friends and family members.

✓ On my birthday, I prefer to go to the cinema to watch movies and I prefer to go with my friends and family members.

The word 'movie' should be plural 'movies' when speaking generally about watching films. Also, 'cinema' is singular and countable, so 'the cinema' is appropriate.

× I went to school on my birthday when whenever I was a child and I always prefer to go school and give chocolates to my friends because of my birthday and I really enjoy it with my friends in the ground.

✓ I went to school on my birthday whenever I was a child and I always preferred to go to school and give chocolates to my friends because of my birthday and I really enjoyed it with my friends on the ground.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the action happened in the past, 'prefer' and 'enjoy' should be in past tense 'preferred' and 'enjoyed'. Also, 'go school' needs the preposition 'to' as in 'go to school'. 'In the ground' should be 'on the ground' as the correct preposition for location.

× I went to school on my birthday when whenever I was a child and I always prefer to go school and give chocolates to my friends because of my birthday and I really enjoy it with my friends in the ground.

✓ I went to school on my birthday whenever I was a child and I always preferred to go to school and give chocolates to my friends because of my birthday and I really enjoyed it with my friends on the ground.

The phrase 'go school' is missing the preposition 'to'. Also, 'in the ground' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on the ground' when referring to a surface.

× Yes, I think it is important to celebrate birthday in my life because on my birthday I feel very special and I also meet loved ones on my birthday.

✓ Yes, I think it is important to celebrate birthdays in my life because on my birthday I feel very special and I also meet loved ones on my birthday.

The phrase 'celebrate birthday' is missing the plural form and article; it should be 'celebrate birthdays'. Also, 'in my life' is acceptable but 'in my life' is correct here. The sentence is otherwise correct.

× Yes, I think it is important to celebrate birthday in my life because on my birthday I feel very special and I also meet loved ones on my birthday.

✓ Yes, I think it is important to celebrate birthdays in my life because on my birthday I feel very special and I also meet loved ones on my birthday.

The noun 'birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' when speaking generally about the concept of celebrating birthdays.

× In China, my mother was there and I think the most important to celebrate the birthday of my mother because I love her so much and sometimes I also baked a cake for her birthdays to fill her special.

✓ In China, my mother is there and I think it is most important to celebrate my mother's birthday because I love her so much and sometimes I also bake a cake for her birthday to make her feel special.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Was' should be 'is' if referring to current presence. 'Baked' should be 'bake' to match the present tense 'sometimes'. 'Birthdays' should be singular 'birthday' when referring to a specific event. 'To fill her special' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'to make her feel special'.

× In China, my mother was there and I think the most important to celebrate the birthday of my mother because I love her so much and sometimes I also baked a cake for her birthdays to fill her special.

✓ In China, my mother is there and I think it is most important to celebrate my mother's birthday because I love her so much and sometimes I also bake a cake for her birthday to make her feel special.

The phrase 'to fill her special' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'to make her feel special' to convey the intended meaning.