Birthday— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Apni answer e grammar ar sentence structure bhalo kore use korun. 'Usually doing' er bodole 'usually do' bolun. Sentence gulo ke short r clear rakhun, ar linking words use korun jemon 'because' ba 'so' jate answer ta natural lage.

Exemplo: My birthday is a very special day for me, so I usually go outside with my parents because it helps us create wonderful memories.

Sugestão: Apni past tense er shothik use korun, jemon 'made' instead of 'make'. Sentence gulo ke clear rakhun ar linking word 'and' ba 'also' bhalo vabe use korun. Details aro specific korle bhalo hobe.

Exemplo: When I was young, I usually celebrated my birthday with my family and friends. We made a small party at my home with candles, cakes, and decorations, which I especially enjoyed.

Sugestão: Apni answer e clear topic sentence din ar grammar shothik korun. 'Agreed' er bodole 'agree' use korun. 'On Thursday' er jaygay 'on this day' bolun. Sentence gulo ke logical ar natural banan.

Exemplo: Yes, I agree that birthdays are important because we create memories on this day. We should celebrate it with a nice party to enjoy together.

Sugestão: Apni answer e ekta clear opinion din ar sentence gulo ke concise rakhun. 'Maybe' er bodole 'I think' use korun. Details aro specific korle answer bhalo hobe. Linking words use korun.

Exemplo: I think the most important birthday to celebrate in China is my child's. He is only two years old, and I want to create happy memories for him on this special day.

× Maybe my birthday is a very special day for me, so I usually doing many things on this day like I went outside and my parents accompanied with me and it's a really significant for making memories.

✓ Maybe my birthday is a very special day for me, so I usually do many things on this day like going outside with my parents accompanying me and it's really significant for making memories.

The phrase 'I usually doing' is incorrect because after 'usually' we use the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'my parents accompanied with me' is incorrect; it should be 'my parents accompanying me' to correctly express the action. Additionally, 'it's a really significant' should be 'it's really significant' because 'significant' is an adjective and does not need 'a' before it.

× Maybe my birthday is a very special day for me, so I usually doing many things on this day like I went outside and my parents accompanied with me and it's a really significant for making memories.

✓ Maybe my birthday is a very special day for me, so I usually do many things on this day like going outside with my parents accompanying me and it's really significant for making memories.

The phrase 'I went outside' is correct in past tense but inconsistent with 'usually' which indicates habitual action in present tense. It should be 'going outside' to match the habitual present tense context.

× Maybe my birthday is a very special day for me, so I usually doing many things on this day like I went outside and my parents accompanied with me and it's a really significant for making memories.

✓ Maybe my birthday is a very special day for me, so I usually do many things on this day like going outside with my parents accompanying me and it's really significant for making memories.

The phrase 'accompanied with me' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'with' after 'accompany' without 'accompanied with'. The correct form is 'my parents accompanying me' or 'my parents accompany me'.

× When I was young, I usually celebrated my birthday with my families and my friends also, so we make a small party at my home with some candles, cakes and other things I especially enjoyed.

✓ When I was young, I usually celebrated my birthday with my family and my friends also, so we made a small party at my home with some candles, cakes and other things I especially enjoyed.

The word 'families' is incorrect here because it should be singular 'family' when referring to one's own family. Also, 'we make' should be past tense 'we made' to match 'When I was young'.

× When I was young, I usually celebrated my birthday with my families and my friends also, so we make a small party at my home with some candles, cakes and other things I especially enjoyed.

✓ When I was young, I usually celebrated my birthday with my family and my friends also, so we made a small party at my home with some candles, cakes and other things I especially enjoyed.

The phrase 'we make' is present tense but the context is past ('When I was young'), so it should be 'we made' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Yes, I firmly agreed with it that all of us would create our memories on Thursday and we should celebrate this day greatly with a gorgeous party and we want to watch.

✓ Yes, I firmly agree with it that all of us should create our memories on Thursday and we should celebrate this day greatly with a gorgeous party and we want to watch.

The phrase 'I firmly agreed' is past tense but the context suggests a present opinion, so 'I firmly agree' is correct. Also, 'would create' is better as 'should create' to express recommendation or obligation.

× Yes, I firmly agreed with it that all of us would create our memories on Thursday and we should celebrate this day greatly with a gorgeous party and we want to watch.

✓ Yes, I firmly agree with it that all of us should create our memories on Thursday and we should celebrate this day greatly with a gorgeous party and we want to watch.

The phrase 'agreed with it' is acceptable but 'agree with it' fits better for present opinion. No major preposition error here but tense correction is more important.

× Yes, I firmly agreed with it that all of us would create our memories on Thursday and we should celebrate this day greatly with a gorgeous party and we want to watch.

✓ Yes, I firmly agree that all of us should create our memories on Thursday and celebrate this day greatly with a gorgeous party that we want to watch.

The sentence is long and awkward. 'Agreed with it that' is better as 'agree that'. Also, 'we want to watch' is unclear; it should be connected properly to the party. The sentence structure is improved by breaking into clearer parts.

× I think maybe it's my own child and I think it is the most important to celebrate in China and I want to celebrate my child's birthday.

✓ I think maybe it's my own child whose birthday is the most important to celebrate in China, and I want to celebrate my child's birthday.

The pronoun 'it' is unclear and should be replaced with 'whose birthday is' to clarify the subject. This improves clarity and correctness.

× He is now only two years old and he will be able to create memories in this place.

✓ He is now only two years old and he will be able to create memories here.

The phrase 'in this place' is awkward; 'here' is more natural. The future tense 'will be able to create' is correct.