Birthday— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and be more specific about your activities. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I usually invite my close friends to celebrate my birthday. We have dinner together, then go to a bar where we sit and talk for hours.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Make sure to answer directly and use correct tense. Also, clarify your ideas and avoid irrelevant information.

Exemplo: When I was young, we didn't do anything special on my birthday because my mother never planned surprises for me.

Sugestão: Your answer is repetitive and incomplete. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Use linking words to organize your thoughts.

Exemplo: Yes, I think it is important to celebrate my birthday. Even if I don't have anyone to celebrate with, I believe it's a good time to focus on myself and reflect on the past year.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant information. Try to answer directly and provide specific examples. Avoid hesitation sounds and incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: In China, I think the most important birthdays to celebrate are those of close family members, like parents and grandparents.

× I usually invite central close friend.

✓ I usually invite close friends from the center.

The phrase 'central close friend' is incorrect because 'friend' should be plural to match 'invite' and 'central' is not the correct adjective here. 'Close friends from the center' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Yeah just eat dinner and and sit in a bar and then talking a lot.

✓ Yeah, just eat dinner, sit in a bar, and then talk a lot.

After 'and', the verb should be in base form to maintain parallel structure. 'Talking' should be 'talk' to match 'eat' and 'sit'.

× When I was young, I remember we don't do many special in our bad day because my mother never plan Saint Patty's surprise to me.

✓ When I was young, I remember we didn't do many special things on our bad days because my mother never planned Saint Patty's surprise for me.

The sentence requires past tense verbs 'didn't' and 'planned' to match the past time frame. 'Special' needs a noun like 'things' after it. 'Bad day' should be plural 'bad days' for generalization. 'Plan' should be 'planned' and 'to me' should be 'for me'.

× Yes, I think I should celebrate my birthday for me even even I don't have any people to invite or to to happy together, I still think MMM I should focus on myself and let let.

✓ Yes, I think I should celebrate my birthday for myself even if I don't have anyone to invite or to be happy with; I still think I should focus on myself.

'For me' should be 'for myself' to use the reflexive pronoun correctly. 'Even even' is redundant and should be 'even if'. 'Any people' is better as 'anyone'. 'To happy together' is incorrect; it should be 'to be happy with'. The sentence is also restructured for clarity.

× I have no idea whose birthday is the most important to celebrate in China. I think Chinese people will celebrate. MMM, dear and dear President's bad day.

✓ I have no idea whose birthday is the most important to celebrate in China. I think Chinese people will celebrate, for example, their loved ones' and the President's birthdays.

'Dear and dear President's bad day' is unclear and incorrect. 'Dear' should be 'loved ones' and 'bad day' should be 'birthdays'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correct pronoun use.