Relax— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer clearer and more concise. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you like visiting cafes and what you enjoy about it.

Exemplo: Recently, I have been visiting several cafes to relax and refresh. I enjoy comparing different places because it helps me find my favourite spot to unwind.

Sugestão: Focus on giving a clear and direct answer first, then add supporting details with linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. For example, explain that you prefer relaxing alone but sometimes with close friends, and why.

Exemplo: I usually relax by myself because I enjoy solitude. However, sometimes I spend time with close friends, as I appreciate both quiet moments and socialising.

Sugestão: Make your answer more structured and grammatically correct. Start with a clear opinion, then explain how music helps you relax, and give a specific example. Avoid asking the examiner questions during your answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I find listening to music very relaxing. It helps me calm down, especially before I go to sleep. For instance, I often listen to soothing songs by Adele because her voice is very calming.

Sugestão: Provide a clear and organised answer with linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. For example, list your relaxing activities and explain why you enjoy them.

Exemplo: To relax, I usually take a nap or lie on the sofa while watching my favourite cat vlogs on YouTube. Additionally, I enjoy eating, which helps me feel comfortable and happy.

× I go to several cafes these days to refresh.

✓ I go to several cafes these days to refresh.

No correction needed here as 'cafes' is correctly plural to match 'several'.

× I love to go around a lot of cafes then compare them, but also to to I go cafes to be able to find my own favorite spot.

✓ I love to go around a lot of cafes and compare them, but I also go to cafes to be able to find my own favorite spot.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunction use and word order. 'Then' is not appropriate here; 'and' better connects the ideas. Also, 'to to I go cafes' is incorrect and should be 'I also go to cafes'. This improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually relax with by myself, well sometimes cloth with close friends because I am the person who can enjoy just by myself because no need to be out outgoing and extrovert.

✓ I usually relax by myself, but sometimes with close friends because I am the kind of person who can enjoy being alone and don't need to be outgoing and extroverted.

The phrase 'relax with by myself' is incorrect; 'relax by myself' is correct. 'Cloth with close friends' seems to be a mishearing or typo and should be 'sometimes with close friends'. Also, 'no need to be out outgoing and extrovert' is incorrect; it should be 'don't need to be outgoing and extroverted' to correctly express the idea.

× Music is always helped me to relax calm.

✓ Music has always helped me to relax and feel calm.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'is always helped' which is not correct. The present perfect tense 'has always helped' is appropriate here to express an action that started in the past and continues. Also, 'to relax calm' is awkward; 'to relax and feel calm' is clearer.

× When I before I go to sleep in the in the bed I usually listen to the music.

✓ Before I go to sleep in bed, I usually listen to music.

The phrase 'When I before I go' is redundant; 'Before I go' suffices. 'In the in the bed' is repetitive; 'in bed' is the correct expression. Also, 'listen to the music' should be 'listen to music' unless referring to specific music previously mentioned.

× For example, have you ever heard any other song? Her voice is very calm.

✓ For example, have you ever heard any other songs? Her voice is very calming.

'Any other song' is better as 'any other songs' to match the plural sense. Also, 'Her voice is very calm' is awkward; 'Her voice is very calming' better expresses the effect of the voice on the listener.

× Usually I take a nap or lay down on the sofa and watch YouTube with my favorite vlog like a cat, but I would I enjoy eating as well.

✓ Usually I take a nap or lie down on the sofa and watch YouTube videos, like my favorite cat vlogs, but I also enjoy eating as well.

'Lay down' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'lie down' when referring to oneself. 'Watch YouTube with my favorite vlog like a cat' is unclear; it should be 'watch YouTube videos, like my favorite cat vlogs'. Also, 'I would I enjoy eating as well' is incorrect and should be 'I also enjoy eating as well' for clarity and correctness.