Coins— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you use coins now?
Candidato
No, nowadays in China people prefer to use the electronic payment by their phones or just scan. Code and you can do everything by standing and scanning a code. So coins is, have been, has been, have been.
Examinador
Is it convenient to use coins?
Candidato
No, I don't think so. Uh, coins is very heavy and not convenient to take. Take outside because you have some you need to text risks. We need to take risk and to lose them. So I prefer to use the QR code and make a payment by my spite Smartform.
Examinador
Have you collected coins when you were a kid?
Candidato
No, actually when I was a kid, I don't have some, I don't have money and my parents paid off my stuff's belongings and the two the tuition fees. So maybe sometimes I will get some snakes from my school. For my school activities.
Examinador
Do you carry coins when you go out?
Candidato
Uh, to be honest, in China nowadays, people prefer to use. Smart phones to make a payment so coins is obsolete, obsolete, obsolete so I don't need to bring coins to outside.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Do you use coins now?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 你的回答表达了主要观点，但语法和表达不够自然，且有重复和语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的时态和表达。
Exemplo: No, people in China now prefer electronic payments using their phones. They just scan a QR code to pay quickly and conveniently, so coins are rarely used.
Is it convenient to use coins?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且部分句子不连贯。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，表达观点时注意逻辑连贯。
Exemplo: No, coins are not convenient because they are heavy and easy to lose. I prefer using QR codes on my smartphone for quick and safe payments.
Have you collected coins when you were a kid?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答内容不够清晰，语法错误较多，且信息表达混乱。建议简化句子，明确表达自己的经历，并使用正确的时态。
Exemplo: No, I didn't collect coins as a child because I didn't have much money. Sometimes, I received small amounts of money from school activities.
Do you carry coins when you go out?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议避免重复，使用完整句子，并且注意主谓一致。
Exemplo: No, I don't carry coins when I go out because most people in China use smartphones to make payments, so coins have become obsolete.
Gramática
× So coins is, have been, has been, have been.
✓ So coins have been.
这里的主语是复数名词“coins”，谓语动词应使用复数形式“have been”，而不是单数形式“is”或“has been”。
× coins is very heavy and not convenient to take.
✓ coins are very heavy and not convenient to take.
“coins”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，而不是单数“is”。
× coins is obsolete, obsolete, obsolete so I don't need to bring coins to outside.
✓ coins are obsolete, obsolete, obsolete so I don't need to bring coins outside.
“coins”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，而不是单数“is”。另外，“bring coins to outside”中“to”多余，应去掉。
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