Coins— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'wedding machine' (likely 'vending machine') and 'con convenient way to spending'. Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar, and keep your sentences concise and natural. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating 'in Australia' twice.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. In Australia, cash is still widely used, and I often use coins for vending machines and bus fares. It's a convenient way to pay for small purchases.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'a lot in Australia is very common to for small purchases' and 'I carry in my van'. Try to form clear, grammatically correct sentences and explain your points with linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, using coins is very common in Australia for small purchases. I usually carry some coins in my wallet, which makes it comfortable and easy to pay quickly.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains tense errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'I have a Piggy Bank' (should be past tense) and 'whenever received by relatives'. Try to use past tense consistently when talking about childhood and add linking words to improve flow.

Exemplo: Yes, when I was a child, I had a piggy bank where I collected coins given by my relatives and parents. I used to save them to buy new clothes and toys.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by avoiding repetition and adding linking words for coherence. Also, 'spend by cash' is better phrased as 'pay with cash'.

Exemplo: Yes, I always carry coins in my bag because I prefer to pay with cash for small purchases. This is very convenient and comfortable for me when I go out.

× It's very con convenient way to spending.

✓ It's a very convenient way to spend.

The phrase 'way to spending' is incorrect because after 'way to' we use the base form of the verb, not the -ing form. Therefore, 'to spend' is correct here.

× I use coins for wedding machine and for my bus fares as well.

✓ I use coins for the vending machine and for my bus fares as well.

The phrase 'wedding machine' is a misused preposition or word; the correct term is 'vending machine'. Also, 'for' is correctly used here to indicate purpose.

× We usually use coins and I carry in my van.

✓ We usually use coins and I carry them in my bag.

The phrase 'carry in my van' is incorrect in this context; 'van' is likely a mistake for 'bag'. Also, the object 'them' (coins) is missing after 'carry'.

× Yes, in my childhood I have a Piggy Bank in which I collect my coins whenever received by relatives and sometime my parents.

✓ Yes, in my childhood I had a Piggy Bank in which I collected my coins whenever I received them from relatives and sometimes my parents.

The sentence mixes present perfect 'have' and present tense 'collect' with a past time reference 'in my childhood'. The correct tense is past: 'had' and 'collected'. Also, 'whenever received' needs a subject 'I' and 'sometimes' is misspelled as 'sometime'.

× I collect them and buy new clothes and toys for me.

✓ I collected them and bought new clothes and toys for myself.

The pronoun 'me' is incorrect here; the reflexive pronoun 'myself' should be used when the subject and object refer to the same person. Also, past tense 'collected' and 'bought' fit the past context.