Fishing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答は内容が豊富ですが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現が見られます。例えば、「near from」は不自然で、「near to」または「close to」が適切です。また、「informations」は不可算名詞なので「information」が正しいです。さらに、文を分けて話すことでより自然で理解しやすくなります。

Exemplo: Fishing is very popular in Japan, especially in coastal cities like Tokyo, Nagoya, and Osaka. Many people can easily access the seashore. Moreover, fishing is often featured on TV programs and in books, which increases its popularity.

Sugestão: 回答は個人的な経験を含んでいて良いですが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多いです。例えば、「a fish」は「fish」に修正し、「Fisher」は「fisherman」が適切です。また、「which was a very memorable for me」は不自然なので、「which was very memorable for me」とするか、文を分けて説明すると良いでしょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I like eating fish. When I was a child, I ate fish almost every day because my grandfather was a fisherman. He caught many different species, which was a very memorable experience for me. Even now, I enjoy eating fish.

Sugestão: 回答は内容が具体的ですが、文法と表現の誤りが目立ちます。「where is one of the rural cities」は「which is one of the rural cities」が正しいです。また、「on every weekends」は「every weekend」に修正し、「which makes me understand」は時制の不一致があるため「which helped me understand」が適切です。

Exemplo: Yes, when I lived in Niigata, which is one of the rural cities, I went to the fish market every weekend. It was a very memorable experience that helped me understand the different species of fish available there.

Sugestão: 回答は内容が重複していますが、文法の誤りが多いです。「a popular」は「popular」に修正し、「old people」は「older people」や「elderly people」がより自然です。また、「is very near from」は「are very close to」が適切で、「makes people easily access to the sea」は「makes it easy for people to access the sea」に直すと自然です。

Exemplo: Yes, fishing is popular in Japan, especially among older people. This is mainly because urban cities like Tokyo, Osaka, and Nagoya are very close to the seashore, which makes it easy for people to access the sea and go fishing.

× because the sea is very near from the city areas such as Tokyo, Nagoya and Osaka

✓ because the sea is very near the city areas such as Tokyo, Nagoya and Osaka

The preposition 'from' is incorrect after 'near'. The correct phrase is 'near the city areas' without 'from'.

× there are many informations on the TV programs or the books

✓ there is much information on TV programs or in books

'Information' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'informations'. Also, 'on the TV programs or the books' should be 'on TV programs or in books' for correct preposition use.

× I had to eat a fish almost everyday

✓ I had to eat fish almost every day

'Fish' in this context is uncountable and does not need an article. Also, 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverbial phrase).

× almost everyday

✓ almost every day

'Everyday' is an adjective meaning common or normal, but here the adverbial phrase 'every day' is needed to indicate frequency.

× my grandfather was a Fisher

✓ my grandfather was a fisherman

'Fisher' is uncommon; the correct noun for someone who fishes is 'fisherman'.

× When he was young he fished many types of the species and which was a very memorable for me

✓ When he was young, he fished many types of species, which was very memorable for me

The sentence is awkward and contains unnecessary words. 'The species' should be 'species' without 'the'. Also, 'which was a very memorable' is incorrect; 'very memorable' is an adjective phrase and does not need 'a'.

× I always went to a fish market on every weekends

✓ I always went to the fish market every weekend

'On every weekends' is incorrect; 'every weekend' is the correct phrase. Also, 'a fish market' should be 'the fish market' if referring to a specific market.

× what a species of the fish are there

✓ what species of fish are there

'Species' is both singular and plural, so 'a species' is singular but the sentence context requires plural. Also, 'the fish' is unnecessary here.

× urban cities like Tokyo, Osaka and Nagoya is very near from the seashore

✓ urban cities like Tokyo, Osaka and Nagoya are very near the seashore

'Cities' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'near from' is incorrect; it should be 'near' without 'from'.

× which makes people easily access to the sea and do fishing

✓ which makes it easy for people to access the sea and go fishing

'Access' is a verb here and does not take 'to' after it. Also, 'do fishing' is unnatural; 'go fishing' is the correct expression.