Laughing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and clear, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid suggesting specific places like bars and restaurants unless directly asked. Instead, focus on the general benefits of laughter and provide a clear supporting detail with linking words.

Exemplo: I believe laughter plays a vital role in daily life because it helps us relax and improve our mood. For example, sharing jokes with friends or family can reduce stress and strengthen relationships.

Sugestão: Your answer is specific and relevant, but it is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your answer more concise and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I last laughed this morning when I watched Japanese comedy videos on YouTube. This has become an important part of my daily routine to start the day with a positive mood.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question well but could be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and try to be more concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I can usually make people laugh when they are relaxed, like in casual settings such as pubs or restaurants. However, it's more difficult to do so in formal situations like lectures.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but somewhat repetitive and slightly unnatural. Try to avoid repeating the same idea about stress relief and use linking words to connect your points more smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy watching funny movies, especially Japanese comedies on platforms like YouTube and Instagram. I usually watch at least one movie daily because it helps me relax and relieve work-related stress.

× Therefore, we should go to bars and restaurants with our friends and family to reduce our stress caused by human relationships.

✓ Therefore, we should go to bars and restaurants with our friends and family to reduce our stress caused by human relationship.

The phrase 'human relationships' is plural, but the context suggests referring to stress caused by the general concept of human relationship. Using the singular 'relationship' is more appropriate here to indicate the overall nature of interactions causing stress.

× The last time I laughed was this morning because I decided to watch Japanese comedy videos on social media platforms like YouTube and Facebook, and I think this routine is very important in my daily life to start a day.

✓ The last time I laughed was this morning because I decided to watch Japanese comedy videos on social media platforms like YouTube and Facebook, and I think this routine is very important in my daily life to start the day.

The phrase 'to start a day' is incorrect because 'day' here refers to a specific day, the current day. Therefore, the definite article 'the' should be used instead of the indefinite article 'a'.

× Yes, I think I can make people laugh easily if they are in relaxed moods such as inside pubs and restaurants.

✓ Yes, I think I can make people laugh easily if they are in a relaxed mood such as inside pubs and restaurants.

The word 'moods' is plural, but the context refers to the general state of being relaxed. Using the singular 'mood' is more appropriate to describe the general condition of people being relaxed.

× However, it is very challenging for me to make people laugh in more formal situation like lecture.

✓ However, it is very challenging for me to make people laugh in a more formal situation like a lecture.

The phrase 'more formal situation' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'more formal situation' because it is singular and countable. Also, 'lecture' is a countable noun and needs the article 'a' before it.

× Yes, I prefer watching funny movies, especially Japanese comedy on YouTube and Instagram.

✓ Yes, I prefer watching funny movies, especially Japanese comedy videos on YouTube and Instagram.

The phrase 'Japanese comedy' is vague; adding 'videos' clarifies that the student refers to comedy videos, which fits the context of watching content on YouTube and Instagram.

× Therefore, I usually watch at least one movie in a day to reduce my stress caused by human relations in my workplace.

✓ Therefore, I usually watch at least one movie a day to reduce my stress caused by human relations in my workplace.

The phrase 'in a day' is less natural than 'a day' when expressing frequency. 'A day' is the correct expression to indicate how often something happens.