Part 1
Examinador
Are the roads in the area where you live busy?
Candidato
Yes, it's very busy because my house is near a commercial circle. So there's always some traffic jam. There are always traffic jam happened there.
Examinador
Do people cross the road in the city where you live?
Candidato
Yes, especially near some big mall or school and there will be some traffic lights to navigate them to across the road.
Examinador
How is the condition of the roads in your city?
Candidato
Not so good, I think. The roads near my house, uh, have some crabs on them and for many years nobody repaired them.
Examinador
Do you think the roads in your city need improvement?
Candidato
Yes, they do need to be improved because the condition of the roads are not so good. There are many crabs on them and. The colour of some rose have fade as well faded as.
Are the roads in the area where you live busy?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达,建议避免重复并使用正确的时态和句型,使表达更自然流畅。
Exemplo: Yes, the roads near my house are very busy because it is close to a commercial area, so traffic jams happen frequently.
Do people cross the road in the city where you live?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答中语法不够准确,建议使用正确的介词和句子结构,并适当使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Exemplo: Yes, people often cross the road near big malls or schools, and there are traffic lights to help them cross safely.
How is the condition of the roads in your city?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中出现了词汇错误(crabs应为cracks),且表达不够具体,建议使用准确词汇并补充具体细节。
Exemplo: I think the roads near my house are in poor condition because they have many cracks and have not been repaired for years.
Do you think the roads in your city need improvement?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇错误,且表达不完整,建议注意语法一致性,避免重复,并使用准确词汇。
Exemplo: Yes, the roads definitely need improvement because they have many cracks and the road markings have faded.
× So there's always some traffic jam.
✓ So there's always some traffic jams.
traffic jam 是可数名词,表示交通堵塞,复数形式应为 traffic jams。这里表示经常有多次堵车,应该用复数形式。
× There are always traffic jam happened there.
✓ There is always traffic jam happening there.
traffic jam 是单数名词,前面用 are 不正确,应使用 is。且 happened 是过去式,句子描述经常发生的情况,应使用现在分词 happening。
× there will be some traffic lights to navigate them to across the road.
✓ there will be some traffic lights to navigate them across the road.
动词 navigate 后面不需要介词 to,直接加宾语即可。to across 是错误搭配,应去掉 to。
× The roads near my house, uh, have some crabs on them and for many years nobody repaired them.
✓ The roads near my house, uh, have some cracks on them and for many years nobody repaired them.
crabs 是螃蟹,语境应为路面裂缝,正确单词是 cracks。
× because the condition of the roads are not so good.
✓ because the condition of the roads is not so good.
主语是 the condition,单数,谓语动词应使用 is 而非 are。
× There are many crabs on them and.
✓ There are many cracks on them.
同上,crabs 应为 cracks,表示裂缝。
× The colour of some rose have fade as well faded as.
✓ The colour of some roses has faded as well.
rose 应为复数 roses,主语是 the colour,单数,谓语动词应为 has faded。