Road— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons using linking words. For example, use 'because' to explain why the roads are busy. Also, avoid redundancy and incorrect word choices.

Exemplo: Yes, the roads near where I live in Kathmandu are very busy because it is the city center with many complexes and offices. As a result, there is heavy traffic congestion during most of the day.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid abbreviations like 'Rd.' and try to be more specific about the problems caused by poor traffic awareness.

Exemplo: Yes, people often cross the roads in my city because the traffic conditions are poor. Since many people are not fully aware of traffic rules, this sometimes leads to accidents. Therefore, improving road safety and raising awareness is very important here.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear topic sentence about the road condition, then add specific supporting details using linking words like 'and' or 'also'. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Exemplo: The condition of the roads in my city is generally good. They are maintained well and can handle traffic throughout the day. Also, safety measures are considered when planning the roads, which is a positive aspect.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Please try to clearly state your opinion first, then explain specific problems and suggest improvements using correct vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases like 'rules are aside' or 'quality of payment'.

Exemplo: Yes, I think the roads in the city need improvement. In the city center, traffic congestion is a big problem, and some roads have potholes that should be filled and leveled to improve safety.

× He has absolutely.

✓ Yes, absolutely.

The pronoun 'He' is incorrectly used here as the subject does not refer to a male person. The correct response should be 'Yes, absolutely.' to affirm the question properly.

× The road near the area that I have been living is very busy since I have been living in the core area of the Kathmandu and there are lots of complexes and cooperative buildings, people who used to travel alerts.

✓ The roads near the area where I have been living are very busy since I have been living in the core area of Kathmandu, and there are lots of complexes and cooperative buildings, with people who usually travel early.

The subject 'road' should be plural 'roads' to match the context of multiple roads. Also, 'people who used to travel alerts' is unclear and likely a misuse; it is corrected to 'people who usually travel early' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× That's why there have been very congested Rd.

✓ That's why the roads have been very congested.

'Rd.' is an abbreviation for 'road' and should be plural 'roads' to match the context. Also, 'there have been' is correct for plural subject 'roads'.

× Yes, people do cross the road in the city where I am living.

✓ Yes, people do cross the roads in the city where I live.

The plural 'roads' fits better as people cross multiple roads. Also, 'where I live' is more natural than 'where I am living' for habitual actions.

× Since my country is still in the public phase, many people are not fully aware about the traffic rules, which sometimes cause problems.

✓ Since my country is still in the public phase, many people are not fully aware of the traffic rules, which sometimes causes problems.

The correct preposition after 'aware' is 'of', not 'about'. Also, 'which sometimes cause problems' should be 'causes' to agree with singular 'which' referring to the situation.

× Therefore, improving Rd. safety and awareness is very important here.

✓ Therefore, improving road safety and awareness is very important here.

'Rd.' should be written as 'road' for clarity. 'Road safety' is a singular concept and correctly used here.

× When the condition of roads in my city is pretty good, they have provided service throughout the day without getting a lot of traffic condensed and and the safety is also being considered while deciding the road which is plus one of the one of the positive in aspect of the road in my city.

✓ The condition of roads in my city is pretty good; they provide service throughout the day without heavy traffic congestion, and safety is also considered when planning the roads, which is one of the positive aspects of the roads in my city.

The original sentence is long and confusing with grammatical errors. 'When' is unnecessary; 'traffic condensed' should be 'traffic congestion'. 'Plus one of the one of the positive in aspect' is corrected to 'one of the positive aspects' for clarity and correctness.

× Well, some of the rules are aside and aside.

✓ Well, some of the rules are ignored or set aside.

'Aside and aside' is unclear and incorrect. The intended meaning is likely that some rules are ignored or set aside.

× The main core area has some problem related to traffic consumption and the quality of payment, so they need some improvement.

✓ The main core area has some problems related to traffic congestion and the quality of pavement, so it needs some improvement.

'Problem' should be plural 'problems' to match 'some'. 'Traffic consumption' is incorrect; the correct term is 'traffic congestion'. 'Quality of payment' is likely a typo for 'quality of pavement'. 'They' should be 'it' to agree with singular 'main core area'.

× The bottles of the road should be filled and make levelled.

✓ The potholes on the road should be filled and made level.

'Bottles of the road' is incorrect; the correct term is 'potholes on the road'. 'Make levelled' should be 'made level' to use the correct past participle and adjective form.