Road— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to directly answer the question first, then add specific details about the roads being busy. Avoid unnecessary information unrelated to the question. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, the roads in Ludhiana, where I live, are very busy. This is because the city is popular for its educational institutions and job opportunities, which attract many people daily. As a result, traffic congestion is common during peak hours.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to give a clear topic sentence and then explain with specific details. Use linking words like 'however' or 'therefore' to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: People do cross the roads in my city, but it depends on the situation. However, the government has built pedestrian stairs to help people cross safely, and many use these facilities to avoid accidents.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'quite a pets'. Focus on directly answering the question with clear and specific details. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

Exemplo: The condition of the roads in my city needs improvement. For example, there are many potholes that make traveling uncomfortable and sometimes dangerous for commuters. Therefore, the roads require proper maintenance to ensure safety.

Sugestão: Your answer is repetitive and contains filler words like 'uh'. Try to be concise and clear. Provide specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe the roads in my city need improvement. Many large potholes cause difficulties for daily commuters, making their journeys uncomfortable. Improving the roads would ensure safer and smoother travel for everyone.

× So most of the people and who lives near about the city are.

✓ So most of the people who live near the city are.

The phrase 'most of the people' is plural, so the verb should be 'live' instead of 'lives'. Also, 'and who' is incorrect and should be removed for clarity. 'Near about' is non-standard; 'near' is sufficient.

× Sometime people like to cross the road in the city where I'm living.

✓ Sometimes people like to cross the road in the city where I live.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Like to cross' is acceptable but 'like crossing' is more natural. 'Where I'm living' is present continuous, but simple present 'where I live' is better for habitual actions.

× But nowadays the system has been developed nowadays because there are some stairs which are established by the government and people use this in order to cross the road.

✓ But nowadays the system has been developed because there are some stairs established by the government, and people use them to cross the road.

Repetition of 'nowadays' is redundant. 'Stairs' is plural, so 'this' should be 'them'. 'Which are established' can be simplified to 'established'. The sentence is in present perfect and present simple, which is appropriate.

× If I talk about the condition of a road system in my city, it need more development nowadays because because there are quite a pets in the road which makes less convenient for the travelers and travelers face difficulty while their journeys.

✓ If I talk about the condition of the road system in my city, it needs more development nowadays because there are quite a few potholes on the road which make it less convenient for travelers, and travelers face difficulty during their journeys.

'Road system' is singular, so 'it needs' is correct. 'Pets' is incorrect; the correct word is 'potholes'. 'Quite a pets' is incorrect quantifier usage; 'quite a few potholes' is correct. 'Makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural 'potholes'. 'In the road' should be 'on the road'. 'While their journeys' is better as 'during their journeys'.

× So it should need development.

✓ So it should be developed.

'Should need development' is incorrect. The correct modal verb construction is 'should be developed' to express necessity for improvement.

× Yes, of course, the road system of my city uh needs improvement so that each under every person who travel on daily basis do not face any difficulty as well as enjoy their comfortable journey.

✓ Yes, of course, the road system of my city needs improvement so that every person who travels on a daily basis does not face any difficulty and can enjoy a comfortable journey.

'Each under every person' is incorrect; 'every person' is sufficient. 'Who travel' should be 'who travels' to agree with singular 'person'. 'Do not' should be 'does not' for singular subject. 'Enjoy their comfortable journey' is better as 'enjoy a comfortable journey'.

× Apart from this, uh, there are big holes, big pets, uh, which is a major reason.

✓ Apart from this, there are big holes, big potholes, which are a major reason.

'Pets' is incorrect; the correct word is 'potholes'. 'Which is' should be 'which are' to agree with plural 'holes' and 'potholes'.