Perfume— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but to improve, try to avoid minor grammatical errors and be more specific. For example, instead of saying "on occasional basis," say "occasionally." Also, you can add a linking word to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy wearing fragrances because they make me feel more confident and refreshed. In fact, I wear perfume occasionally, especially during special events or outings.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct sentence structures and clearer linking words. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas in the same sentence.

Exemplo: Yes, I use perfume daily because it helps me feel confident and refreshed. For instance, I prefer the Florissant fragrance as it suits my personality well.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear due to grammatical errors and awkward expressions. To improve, focus on clear sentence structure and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, be specific about why perfume makes a good gift.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe perfume is a great gift because it shows appreciation. Moreover, it often brings a smile to the recipient's face, making it a thoughtful present.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but needs better sentence structure and linking words for coherence. Avoid short, fragmented sentences and try to combine ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, perfumes can be expensive due to inflation and brand differences. While some brands charge high prices, others offer more affordable options.

× I wear it on occasional basis.

✓ I wear it on an occasional basis.

The phrase 'on occasional basis' is missing the article 'an' before the singular noun 'occasional basis'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Hence, 'an occasional basis' is correct.

× Definitely fragrances are made to use on daily basis.

✓ Definitely, fragrances are made to be used on a daily basis.

The phrase 'made to use on daily basis' is incorrect. The correct form is 'made to be used' because 'made' is followed by the passive infinitive 'to be used'. Also, 'on daily basis' requires the article 'a' before 'daily basis'.

× For example, I prefer Florissant for fragrance for feeling confident all the time and refreshed at the same time.

✓ For example, I prefer Florissant fragrance because it makes me feel confident and refreshed all the time.

The phrase 'for fragrance for feeling confident' is awkward and incorrect. It should be rephrased to 'Florissant fragrance because it makes me feel confident and refreshed'. This corrects the sentence structure and improves clarity.

× I contend that are giving gift.

✓ I contend that giving a gift is good.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb agreement and is incomplete. 'That are giving gift' is incorrect. The corrected sentence provides a clear subject and verb, making the sentence complete and meaningful.

× A perfume can be a sign of appreciation and also, as we know, gives bring smile on.

✓ A perfume can be a sign of appreciation and also, as we know, brings a smile to others.

The phrase 'gives bring smile on' is grammatically incorrect and confusing. The correct verb is 'brings' (third person singular), and the phrase should be 'brings a smile to others' to convey the intended meaning.

× The faces of others so it can be a better gift I think.

✓ It can be a better gift, I think, because it brings smiles to the faces of others.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper connectors. The corrected sentence combines the ideas properly with conjunctions and commas for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, due to inflation the products are very expensive, so are the perfumes.

✓ Yes, due to inflation, products are very expensive, and so are perfumes.

The sentence needs commas after introductory phrases and proper conjunctions. Also, 'the products' and 'the perfumes' can be generalized without 'the' in this context.

× Because it depends according to the brand.

✓ Because it depends on the brand.

The phrase 'depends according to the brand' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'on' after 'depends'. Hence, 'depends on the brand' is correct.

× Some brand offers high prices but some are quite cheap as well.

✓ Some brands offer high prices, but some are quite cheap as well.

'Brand' should be plural 'brands' to agree with 'some', and the verb should be 'offer' to match the plural subject.