Perfume— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to make your sentences clearer and more natural by correcting grammar and simplifying expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea twice.

Exemplo: No, I don't like perfumes because I suffer from migraines. Whenever I smell perfume, it gives me a severe headache, so I prefer to avoid using or smelling any perfumes.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using more natural expressions and better sentence structure. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'in my daily life' and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: No, I don't use perfume daily because, as I mentioned earlier, I have migraine problems. Therefore, I avoid strong smells to keep myself healthy.

Sugestão: Your answer shows good ideas but the sentence structure is confusing. Try to organize your thoughts clearly and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, use correct grammar and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I would love to buy perfume as a gift, but it depends on the person. If I know they like perfume, I will definitely give it to them because I consider their preferences.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid irrelevant or confusing information. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Exemplo: Yes, I think perfumes are expensive because many popular brands sell them at high prices. People buy them as gifts because of their strong and pleasant fragrances.

× No, I actually don't like perfumes because as I am a great patient, I really whenever I smell a perfume my headache is hurting so much and so I prefer not to smell any, not to use any perfumes.

✓ No, I actually don't like perfume because I am a great patient, and whenever I smell perfume, my headache hurts so much, so I prefer not to smell or use any perfume.

The word 'perfumes' should be singular 'perfume' when referring to the general concept. Also, 'headache is hurting' is incorrect; 'headache hurts' is correct because 'headache' is a singular noun and the verb should agree accordingly.

× No, I don't use perfume in my daily life. As I said before I have migraine problems so I try to avoid this kind of smelly things and it keeps my health sound and good so I prefer not to use it in my daily basis life.

✓ No, I don't use perfume in my daily life. As I said before, I have migraine problems, so I try to avoid these kinds of smelly things, and it keeps my health sound and good, so I prefer not to use it in my daily life.

The phrase 'in my daily basis life' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in my daily life'. Also, 'this kind of smelly things' should be 'these kinds of smelly things' to match plural form and demonstrative pronoun.

× Yes, I would love to buy perfume as a gift but it is also like whom I give to the gift because if they like it I will definitely gift them.

✓ Yes, I would love to buy perfume as a gift, but it also depends on whom I give the gift to because if they like it, I will definitely gift it to them.

The sentence structure is awkward and the pronoun usage is incorrect. 'It is also like whom I give to the gift' should be 'it also depends on whom I give the gift to'. Also, 'gift them' should be 'gift it to them' to correctly use the verb 'gift' with an object.

× Yes, I think perfumes are expensive and it is very costly because there are so many parents which is trending now and people are buying this for their friends and it is very costly.

✓ Yes, I think perfumes are expensive and very costly because there are so many brands which are trending now, and people are buying them for their friends.

'Parents' is incorrect; the intended word is 'brands'. Also, 'which is trending' should be 'which are trending' to agree with plural 'brands'. 'People are buying this' should be 'people are buying them' to refer to plural 'brands' or 'perfumes'.

× The fragrances is strong so people like it.

✓ The fragrances are strong, so people like them.

'Fragrances' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, pronouns should agree in number: 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'fragrances'.