Perfume— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答は自然で意味は伝わりますが、文法の誤り（"in their lives"は不自然）や冗長な表現があります。より簡潔で正確な表現を心がけ、文を分けて明確にしましょう。

Exemplo: No, I don't like the smell of perfume because I prefer natural scents like the ocean or greenery. Therefore, I usually ask my wife not to wear perfume.

Sugestão: 内容は明確ですが、冠詞の使い方（"a perfume"は不自然）や複数形の誤り（"a big parties"）があります。より自然な表現に注意し、接続詞を使って文をつなげましょう。

Exemplo: No, I don't usually wear perfume, but on special occasions like birthdays or big parties, I wear it because it motivates me.

Sugestão: "Umm"は話し言葉としては自然ですが、スピーキングテストでは控えめに。"clean and cool smell"は不自然なので、より適切な形容詞を使いましょう。また、文のつながりを明確にするために接続詞を使うと良いです。

Exemplo: No, I don't plan to buy perfume as a gift. However, some people choose it because many women like fresh and pleasant scents.

Sugestão: ブランド名のスペルミス（"Channels"→"Chanel"、"Louis Vuittons"→"Louis Vuitton"）に注意しましょう。また、"a perfume"は不自然で、"jewelries"は不可算名詞なので"jewelry"が正しいです。文の流れをスムーズにするために接続詞を使いましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I think perfume is quite expensive because it is made by big companies like Chanel or Louis Vuitton. I believe it's better to buy other items such as rings or jewelry.

× I always ask my wife not to use perfume in their lives.

✓ I always ask my wife not to use perfume in her life.

The pronoun 'their' is plural, but 'my wife' is singular. Therefore, the singular pronoun 'her' should be used to match the singular subject.

× No, I don't usually use a perfume, but on special occasions such as someone's birthdays or a big parties, I wear a perfume because it can motivate me.

✓ No, I don't usually use perfume, but on special occasions such as someone's birthday or big parties, I wear perfume because it can motivate me.

The article 'a' is unnecessary before 'perfume' because 'perfume' is an uncountable noun here. Also, 'birthdays' should be singular 'birthday' when referring to a specific occasion, and 'a big parties' is incorrect because 'parties' is plural; the article 'a' should be removed.

× No, I don't usually use a perfume, but on special occasions such as someone's birthdays or a big parties, I wear a perfume because it can motivate me.

✓ No, I don't usually use perfume, but on special occasions such as someone's birthday or big parties, I wear perfume because it can motivate me.

The plural 'birthdays' should be singular 'birthday' when referring to a specific occasion. Also, 'a big parties' is incorrect because 'parties' is plural; the article 'a' should be removed.

× I think a perfume is a little expensive and that's mainly because it can be made by big companies such as Channels or Louis Vuittons.

✓ I think perfume is a little expensive and that's mainly because it can be made by big companies such as Chanel or Louis Vuitton.

The article 'a' is unnecessary before 'perfume' because 'perfume' is an uncountable noun here. Also, brand names should be singular and correctly spelled: 'Chanel' and 'Louis Vuitton'.

× I think a perfume is a little expensive and that's mainly because it can be made by big companies such as Channels or Louis Vuittons.

✓ I think perfume is a little expensive and that's mainly because it can be made by big companies such as Chanel or Louis Vuitton.

The plural forms 'Channels' and 'Louis Vuittons' are incorrect; the correct singular brand names are 'Chanel' and 'Louis Vuitton'.

× I think we should buy much better items such as rings or jewelries.

✓ I think we should buy much better items such as rings or jewelry.

The word 'jewelry' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form 'jewelries'. Therefore, 'jewelry' should be used instead.