Perfume— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'live a good impression' should be 'leave a good impression', and 'social event' should be plural 'social events'. Try to use correct collocations and grammar to sound more natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I really like perfume because it plays an important role in my daily life. It helps me feel more confident and leave a good impression on others, especially during social events or work meetings.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. 'I just performed during working' is confusing. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons. Also, use plural forms where appropriate, e.g., 'clients'.

Exemplo: Yes, I use perfume every day at work. Since I work in a marketing agency and often meet clients, I want to leave a good impression.

Sugestão: Your answer shows some good ideas but the expression is unclear and contains errors. 'Perfume is very personality' should be 'perfume is very personal'. Also, avoid hesitations like 'Umm' in your answer. Try to give a clear opinion with supporting reasons and examples.

Exemplo: I probably wouldn't buy perfume as a gift because it is very personal and not everyone likes the same scent. For example, some people prefer strong, retro fragrances, while others like light, floral ones.

Sugestão: Your answer has several errors and is somewhat repetitive. 'Dioramas' should be 'Dior' and 'famous perfume' should be 'famous perfumes'. Try to give a clear opinion with specific examples and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I think perfumes are quite expensive. For instance, Dior perfumes are very popular but also costly, and I usually buy well-known brands despite the price.

× I really like perfume because it plays a really important role in my daily life.

✓ I really like perfume because it plays a very important role in my daily life.

The quantifier 'really' is used informally and repetitively here. 'Very' is more appropriate to modify 'important' in this context to express degree clearly and formally.

× live a good impression on others

✓ leave a good impression on others

The verb 'live' is incorrect here; the correct collocation is 'leave a good impression on others' to express making a positive impact.

× especially during social event or work meeting.

✓ especially during social events or work meetings.

The nouns 'event' and 'meeting' should be plural to match the general context indicated by 'especially during' which implies multiple occasions.

× I just performed during working.

✓ I just wore it while working.

The verb 'performed' is incorrect in this context; 'wore it' (referring to perfume) is appropriate. Also, 'during working' is incorrect; 'while working' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× I always meet the client, so I have to leave a good impression.

✓ I always meet clients, so I have to leave a good impression.

The noun 'client' should be plural 'clients' to indicate multiple people, matching the context of a marketing agency.

× Umm maybe I won't buy perfume too as a gift to my friend because perfume is very personality and it's not suitable for everyone.

✓ Umm maybe I won't buy perfume as a gift for my friend because perfume is very personal and it's not suitable for everyone.

The modal verb 'won't' is correct but 'too' is unnecessary and misplaced. 'As a gift to my friend' should be 'as a gift for my friend'. 'Very personality' is incorrect; the adjective 'personal' should be used.

× Maybe someone like Retro, someone like Light Pearl?

✓ Maybe some people like Retro, and some people like Light Pearl?

The pronoun 'someone' is singular and does not fit the plural context. 'Some people' is appropriate to refer to different preferences among multiple individuals.

× For example dioramas are very famous perfume and they are so expensive and I always buy the famous perfume so.

✓ For example, Dioramas is a very famous perfume and it is very expensive, and I always buy famous perfumes.

The brand name 'Dioramas' is singular and should be treated as such. 'Perfume' should be singular when referring to a specific brand. 'They are' should be 'it is' to agree with singular subject. 'The famous perfume' is vague; 'famous perfumes' plural is better to express general preference.