Part 1
Examinador
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Candidato
Yes, my favorite teacher is my history teacher from my high school. He had a really good sense of humor and always make drugs in the class. He was so wonderful and can always help me to improve my history and to make them.
Examinador
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Candidato
Not really. I unfortunately I don't contact with them until now. We just lose contacts after I leave the primary school and it's been a long time, I think more than 10 years. But I can still record their kindness and patience. They are really good teachers in my primary schools.
Examinador
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Candidato
Yes, my favorite teacher usually support me to speak in front of the people during his class. He always encourages to share our points and try to make everyone feel comfortable. Since I was quite shy, this supportive attitude really helps me to improve my.
Examinador
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Candidato
Not really, I really appreciate and respect teachers but since I used to be a tutor in the school I can see how difficult to be a teacher. They not only just teaching knowledge, they also have to manage the groups and class. That's so hard for me.
Do you have a favourite teacher?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当,如“make drugs”应为“make jokes”或“tell jokes”,且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意动词时态和主谓一致,避免用词错误,同时保持句子简洁自然。
Exemplo: Yes, my favorite teacher was my high school history teacher. He had a great sense of humor and always told jokes in class. He was very supportive and helped me improve my understanding of history.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误,如“don't contact with them”应为“haven't been in contact with them”,且表达不够流畅。建议使用正确的时态和介词,句子结构更自然,同时丰富细节。
Exemplo: Not really. Unfortunately, I haven't been in contact with my primary school teachers since I left primary school over ten years ago. However, I still remember their kindness and patience. They were really good teachers.
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误,如“support me to speak”应为“supported me to speak”,且句子未完整。建议注意时态一致,句子完整,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Exemplo: My favorite teacher usually supported me to speak in front of the class. He always encouraged us to share our opinions and tried to make everyone feel comfortable. Since I was quite shy, his supportive attitude really helped me improve my confidence.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答表达基本清晰,但存在语法错误,如“how difficult to be a teacher”应为“how difficult it is to be a teacher”,且句子结构略显简单。建议注意句子完整性和语法准确性,适当使用连接词。
Exemplo: Not really. I really appreciate and respect teachers, but since I used to be a tutor at school, I understand how difficult it is to be a teacher. They not only teach knowledge but also have to manage the class and groups, which is very challenging for me.
× He had a really good sense of humor and always make drugs in the class.
✓ He had a really good sense of humor and always made jokes in the class.
动词与第三人称单数主语不一致,动词make应改为makes或根据时态改为made。这里时态为过去时,故用made。且原句中'drugs'应为'jokes',但根据题目只纠正语法错误。
× He was so wonderful and can always help me to improve my history and to make them.
✓ He was so wonderful and could always help me to improve my history and to make them.
时态不一致,前半句为过去时,后半句用can不合适,应使用过去时态的情态动词could。
× I unfortunately I don't contact with them until now.
✓ Unfortunately, I haven't contacted them until now.
动词contact后不加介词with,且时态应为现在完成时,表示从过去到现在的状态。
× We just lose contacts after I leave the primary school and it's been a long time, I think more than 10 years.
✓ We just lost contact after I left primary school and it's been a long time, I think more than 10 years.
contact作为不可数名词,不用复数形式contacts;动词时态应为过去时,表示过去发生的动作。
× Yes, my favorite teacher usually support me to speak in front of the people during his class.
✓ Yes, my favorite teacher usually supported me to speak in front of people during his class.
句子描述过去的情况,动词support应使用过去时supported;people前不需要加定冠词the。
× He always encourages to share our points and try to make everyone feel comfortable.
✓ He always encourages us to share our points and tries to make everyone feel comfortable.
动词encourage后应接宾语,缺少宾语us;主语He为第三人称单数,try应改为tries。
× Since I was quite shy, this supportive attitude really helps me to improve my.
✓ Since I was quite shy, this supportive attitude really helped me to improve myself.
句子缺少宾语myself,且时态应与前文保持一致,改为过去时helped。
× Not really, I really appreciate and respect teachers but since I used to be a tutor in the school I can see how difficult to be a teacher.
✓ Not really, I really appreciate and respect teachers but since I used to be a tutor in the school, I can see how difficult it is to be a teacher.
句子缺少形式主语it,表达“how difficult it is to be a teacher”。
× They not only just teaching knowledge, they also have to manage the groups and class.
✓ They not only just teach knowledge, they also have to manage the groups and classes.
动词teaching应改为teach以符合主语;class应为复数classes,与groups保持一致。
× That's so hard for me.
✓ That's so hard for me.
该句语法正确,无需修改。