Teacher— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevabınızda çok sayıda öğretmenden bahsetmişsiniz ve cümle yapısı karışık. Daha doğal ve etkili olmak için, sadece en sevdiğiniz öğretmeni belirtip, neden sevdiğinizi açıklayın. Cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve net tutun, gereksiz tekrarları önleyin.

Exemplo: My favourite teacher is my physics teacher because he always encouraged me to follow my dreams and never give up.

Sugestão: Cevabınızda bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam belirsizlikleri var. Daha doğal ve etkili olmak için, geçmiş zaman kullanımı ve duygularınızı açıkça ifade edin. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha akıcı hale getirmek için bağlaçlar kullanın.

Exemplo: No, I am not in touch with her because she passed away when she was 60. However, I loved her very much and hope to visit her grave someday.

Sugestão: Cevabınızda güzel bir fikir var ancak cümleleriniz biraz dağınık ve tekrarlar mevcut. Daha etkili olmak için, düşüncelerinizi daha düzenli ve bağlantılı şekilde ifade edin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri birbirine bağlayın ve daha spesifik örnekler verin.

Exemplo: My English and physics teachers helped me develop a love for languages. For example, my physics teacher always encouraged me by saying that following your dreams is important and that betraying yourself leads to regret.

Sugestão: Cevabınızda düşüncenizi ifade etmişsiniz ancak cümle yapısı ve kelime seçimi daha doğal olabilir. Daha etkili olmak için, neden öğretmen olmak istemediğinizi ve neden çevirmen olmak istediğinizi açık ve net şekilde belirtin.

Exemplo: No, I don't want to be a teacher because I think it is a very challenging job that requires special skills. Instead, I want to be a translator because I enjoy working with languages and helping people communicate.

× Actually I do a lot of teacher I love and my top ten list is my first one is physics teacher, second one is English teacher and third one is Turkish teacher, Turkish literacy literacy teacher and the fourth one is linguistic teacher and 5 is.

✓ Actually I have a lot of teachers I love and my top ten list is: my first one is my physics teacher, second one is my English teacher, third one is my Turkish literacy teacher, the fourth one is my linguistics teacher, and the fifth is...

The sentence incorrectly uses singular 'teacher' instead of plural 'teachers' when referring to multiple teachers. Also, possessive pronouns 'my' are needed before the teacher subjects to clarify ownership. The list needs proper enumeration and article usage for clarity.

× No I'm not touched with her because she did at 60 but I love her a lot.

✓ No, I'm not in touch with her because she died at 60, but I love her a lot.

The phrase 'not touched with her' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'not in touch with her' to indicate contact. Also, 'did at 60' is incorrect; the correct past tense verb is 'died at 60'.

× No I'm not touched with her because she did at 60 but I love her a lot.

✓ No, I'm not in touch with her because she died at 60, but I love her a lot.

The verb 'did' is incorrectly used instead of the past tense of 'die', which is 'died'. This is a past tense error.

× I I don't know where it is grave is but I love her a lot.

✓ I don't know where her grave is, but I love her a lot.

The phrase 'it is grave is' is incorrect. The correct possessive pronoun 'her' should be used to refer to the grave belonging to her. Also, the sentence structure needs correction for clarity.

× I hope I can see her grief grave one day.

✓ I hope I can see her grave one day.

The word 'grief' is incorrectly inserted before 'grave'. The correct phrase is 'her grave'. 'Grief' is a noun meaning sorrow, which is not appropriate here.

× It helped me to like languages, my English teacher and my physics teacher.

✓ They helped me to like languages: my English teacher and my physics teacher.

The pronoun 'It' is singular but refers to two teachers, so it should be plural 'They'.

× My physics teacher always told me you have to follow your dreams.

✓ My physics teacher always told me that you have to follow your dreams.

Adding 'that' after 'told me' improves sentence clarity and correctness in reported speech.

× If you betray yourself, you cannot be a good man, you cannot help yourself.

✓ If you betray yourself, you cannot be a good person; you cannot help yourself.

The phrase 'a good man' is gender-specific; 'a good person' is more neutral and appropriate. Also, a semicolon improves sentence structure.

× You always, you always have a remorse in your life.

✓ You always have remorse in your life.

The article 'a' before 'remorse' is incorrect because 'remorse' is an uncountable noun. Also, repetition of 'you always' is unnecessary.

× No, I don't. I want to be a translator because the teacher occupation is too hard for everybody and the special, special persons can do the teaching I cannot do because I know I can't.

✓ No, I don't. I want to be a translator because the teaching profession is too hard for everyone, and only special people can do teaching. I cannot do it because I know I can't.

The phrase 'teacher occupation' is incorrect; 'teaching profession' is better. 'Everybody' is replaced with 'everyone' for formality. 'Special persons' is changed to 'special people'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.