Mirrors— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness. Try to use complete sentences and correct verb forms. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly. For example, instead of 'Was quite often to be honest,' say 'I look at myself quite often.'

Exemplo: Yes, I like looking at myself in the mirror quite often. I am particular about my appearance, so I usually check to make sure I look presentable before going out. This helps me feel more confident and ready to face the day.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors that make it difficult to understand. Focus on forming complete and coherent sentences. Also, provide specific details to support your answer. For example, explain why you think mirrors are essential and how many you have at home.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought mirrors before because I think they are essential. I make sure to have at least a few mirrors in my house since I use them every day to check my appearance.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, avoid short, incomplete sentences. For example, instead of 'It allows me to check about. My looks,' say 'It allows me to check my looks, such as my makeup and teeth after eating.'

Exemplo: Yes, I usually take a mirror with me. In fact, my phone case has a mirror on the back, which is very convenient. It allows me to check my looks, such as my makeup and teeth after I eat. I find it very useful.

Sugestão: Your answer expresses your opinion clearly but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to organize your ideas more logically and use linking words. Also, avoid informal fillers like 'Ah' and use complete sentences.

Exemplo: I wouldn't use mirrors to decorate my room. Although they can be decorative, I prefer not to have them because I find it scary to wake up in the middle of the night and see my reflection in a mirror beside me.

× Was quite often to be honest.

✓ It was quite often, to be honest.

The original sentence lacks a subject and auxiliary verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'It' as the subject and 'was' as the past tense verb completes the sentence properly.

× I've seen myself quite particular about my appearance, so I usually check to make sure that I look presentable before are going out.

✓ I've been quite particular about my appearance, so I usually check to make sure that I look presentable before going out.

The phrase 'I've seen myself quite particular' is incorrect; 'I've been' is the correct present perfect form to express a state. Also, 'before are going out' is incorrect; it should be 'before going out' without 'are'.

× This just make me feel more confident and ready to face the day.

✓ This just makes me feel more confident and ready to face the day.

The subject 'This' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' to agree in number.

× Yes, I have a for me, Marrows is some saying that it's quite. Essential.

✓ Yes, I have one for me. Mirrors are something I consider quite essential.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses 'a' incorrectly without a noun. 'Marrows' is a misspelling of 'mirrors'. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects quantifier usage.

× So I make sure they are aids at least. Some kind of marrow in my house.

✓ So I make sure there are at least some kind of mirrors in my house.

The phrase 'they are aids at least' is unclear and incorrect. 'Some kind of marrow' should be 'some kind of mirrors'. The correction uses 'there are' to indicate existence and corrects quantifiers.

× Because I use it everyday.

✓ Because I use it every day.

'Everyday' is an adjective meaning common or normal; the correct phrase to indicate frequency is 'every day' as two words.

× Yes, I do. And actually my phone case on the back, it is a Meryl.

✓ Yes, I do. Actually, my phone case on the back has a mirror.

'Meryl' is a misspelling of 'mirror'. The sentence structure is awkward; rephrasing improves clarity.

× So I think it's very convenient. It allows me to check about. My looks, such as my makeups and my teeth after I eat.

✓ So I think it's very convenient. It allows me to check my looks, such as my makeup and my teeth after I eat.

The preposition 'about' is unnecessary after 'check'. 'Makeups' should be 'makeup' as an uncountable noun.

× Ah I wouldn't say so to decorate it's I just be there as a 2 but I wouldn't use it to decorate my room 'cause to be honest I find it quite scary to wake up in the middle night in to see yourself in a mirror that is besides you.

✓ Ah, I wouldn't say so. To decorate, it would just be there as a tool, but I wouldn't use it to decorate my room because, to be honest, I find it quite scary to wake up in the middle of the night and see yourself in a mirror that is beside you.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'it's I just be there as a 2' is unclear and likely a transcription error; 'besides you' should be 'beside you'; 'in the middle night' should be 'in the middle of the night'; 'in to see' should be 'and see'. The correction clarifies meaning and fixes pronoun and preposition usage.