Mirrors— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答に多くの「あの」「ええと」などのフィラーが含まれており、流暢さを妨げています。また、「office condition」などの表現が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。より自然で効果的な表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。

Exemplo: No, I don't really like looking at myself in the mirror because I'm not confident about my posture. However, before I go to work, I usually check my appearance briefly in the mirror.

Sugestão: 文法の誤りや不自然な表現（"form of batting at baseball"や"spoiled it"）があり、意味が伝わりにくいです。より正確な語彙と文法を使い、内容を明確に伝える練習が必要です。

Exemplo: Yes, three years ago I bought a large mirror to check my baseball batting form. After I got married, I no longer needed two big mirrors, so I got rid of one.

Sugestão: 文法ミスや不自然な表現（"instead of my wife always bring her on a small mirror"）が多く、意味が分かりにくいです。正しい文法と自然な表現を使い、簡潔に答えることが重要です。

Exemplo: No, I don't usually carry a mirror with me. Instead, my wife always carries a small mirror, so I borrow hers when I want to check my face.

Sugestão: 内容は理解できますが、繰り返しの接続詞「and so」が多用されており、文章がやや冗長です。より自然な接続詞を使い、簡潔に表現することが望ましいです。

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes use mirrors to decorate my room because they make the space feel larger than it actually is. Therefore, I have a large mirror as part of my home decor.

× I don't like a stare at the mirrors for a long time.

✓ I don't like staring at mirrors for a long time.

The verb 'like' is followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing general preferences. 'Stare' should be changed to 'staring'. Also, 'a' before 'stare' is unnecessary here, and 'mirrors' should be plural without 'the' because it refers to mirrors in general.

× I always check my office condition by looking a mirror.

✓ I always check my appearance by looking in a mirror.

The phrase 'looking a mirror' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' when referring to looking into a mirror. Also, 'office condition' is unclear; likely, the student means their appearance or condition before work.

× I don't like a stare at the mirrors for a long time.

✓ I don't like staring at mirrors for a long time.

The plural form 'mirrors' is correct here because it refers to mirrors in general, not a specific mirror. The article 'a' is unnecessary before 'stare'.

× I bought a very big and a wide mirror.

✓ I bought a very big and wide mirror.

When listing adjectives before a noun, the article 'a' should only be used once before the first adjective. Using 'a' before both 'big' and 'wide' is incorrect.

× I got married with my wife, so I don't need two big mirrors.

✓ I got married to my wife, so I don't need two big mirrors.

The correct preposition after 'married' is 'to', not 'with'. 'Married with' is incorrect in this context.

× So I spoiled it.

✓ So I got rid of it.

The verb 'spoiled' is incorrect here; likely, the student means they discarded or no longer needed the mirror. 'Got rid of it' is a better expression.

× No, I don't take a mirror in my daily life instead of my wife always bring her on a small mirror.

✓ No, I don't carry a mirror in my daily life; instead, my wife always brings her small mirror.

The phrase 'bring her on a small mirror' is incorrect. It should be 'brings her small mirror'. Also, 'take a mirror' is better expressed as 'carry a mirror'.

× So if I want to check on my face I borrow mirror from her.

✓ So if I want to check my face, I borrow a mirror from her.

The article 'a' is missing before 'mirror'. Also, 'check on my face' should be 'check my face' for natural expression.

× Sometimes the mirrors can help me feel the room is much wider than reality and so I think it's a very important item for the home decoration and so I have a very big one.

✓ Sometimes mirrors can help me feel the room is much wider than it really is, so I think they're very important items for home decoration, and I have a very big one.

'The mirrors' is changed to 'mirrors' to refer generally. 'It's a very important item' is changed to 'they're very important items' to agree with plural 'mirrors'. Also, the sentence is restructured for clarity and naturalness.