Dreams— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Apni uttor e boro sentence use koren kintu kichu sentence incomplete o unclear. Apnar uttor ke aro natural o shothik korte, prothome proshner uttor spostho vabe din, tarpor supporting details add korun. Linking words use koren jate kotha shongjog thake. Apni specific profession er kotha bolsen, eta bhalo, kintu sentence gulo shothik structure e hote hobe.

Exemplo: Yes, I can remember my dreams clearly. For example, I always dreamed of becoming a doctor or a government employee like a magistrate. I am very confident about achieving these dreams because I work hard. Moreover, I believe these professions are respected in society.

Sugestão: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar o vocabulary error ache, ar sentence gulo incomplete. Apni proshner uttor spostho vabe din, tarpor supporting details add korun. Linking words use koren jate kotha shongjog thake. Apnar feelings o karon spostho vabe bolun.

Exemplo: I usually do not share my dreams with others because I am an introvert person. Also, I prefer to keep my personal thoughts private. However, I am interested in listening to others' dreams sometimes because it helps me understand them better.

Sugestão: Apnar uttor e kichu confusion ache ar sentence gulo incomplete. Apni proshner uttor spostho o shothik vabe din. Supporting details dite linking words use korun. Specific example o karon add koren.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe dreams can have special meanings because they sometimes reflect our feelings or thoughts. However, I also think that not all dreams are important, and people should focus more on reality than just dreaming.

Sugestão: Apnar uttor e kichu sentence incomplete o contradictory mone hoy. Apni proshner uttor spostho o logical vabe din. Supporting details dite linking words use korun. Apnar feelings o karon bistarito bolun.

Exemplo: Yes, I want to make my dreams come true because they motivate me. However, I also understand that sometimes dreams may not become reality, so I try to stay practical and focus on achievable goals.

× I always dreamed of having a very good profession such as doctor and a government employee or anything like magistrate or church I guess.

✓ I always dreamed of having a very good profession such as a doctor, a government employee, or anything like a magistrate or a church official, I guess.

The sentence lists professions but misses articles before singular countable nouns like 'doctor', 'government employee', 'magistrate', and 'church official'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article ('a' or 'an'). Adding 'a' before each profession corrects the singular and plural usage.

× And I myself is very confident about this kind of dreams.

✓ And I myself am very confident about this kind of dream.

The subject 'I' requires the verb 'am' instead of 'is'. Also, 'this kind of dreams' is incorrect because 'kind' is singular, so it should be followed by a singular noun 'dream'.

× I don't like to share about my personal things such as dreams or any other kinds of stuffs and I am really not interested in other streams.

✓ I don't like to share my personal things such as dreams or any other kinds of stuff, and I am really not interested in other streams.

The phrase 'share about' is incorrect; 'share' does not need 'about'. Also, 'stuffs' is incorrect; 'stuff' is uncountable and does not have a plural form. Correcting these improves pronoun and noun usage.

× I think it is very convenient for people to their dreams and.

✓ I think it is very convenient for people to share their dreams.

The original sentence is incomplete and missing the verb after 'to'. Adding 'share' completes the sentence and corrects the prepositional phrase.

× But in reality people should not dreamt of everything they should be.

✓ But in reality, people should not dream of everything; they should be realistic.

'Should' is a modal verb and must be followed by the base form of the verb, so 'dreamt' is incorrect here; it should be 'dream'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs completion for clarity.

× Yes, I absolutely love to make my dreams come true but I am not sure if it is happening or not but I really love to stay in my reality because dreams are dreams that cannot be true.

✓ Yes, I absolutely love to make my dreams come true, but I am not sure if it will happen or not. I really love to stay in my reality because dreams are dreams that cannot always be true.

The phrase 'if it is happening' is incorrect for future possibility; 'if it will happen' is appropriate. Also, the sentence is long and needs punctuation for clarity. The modal verb 'will' correctly expresses future uncertainty.