Dreams— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: In English (Cambodia), you should focus on using correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structures. For example, use 'dreamed' instead of 'dream' for past events, and clarify unclear phrases like 'Extreme motivated me'. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly.

Exemplo: When I was a child, I often dreamed about studying abroad because I wanted to experience a different culture and get a better education. For example, I hoped to receive a scholarship to help me study in another country. This dream motivated me to work hard in school and prepare for my future.

Sugestão: In English (Cambodia), pay attention to subject-verb agreement and prepositions. For example, say 'sharing dreams with others' instead of 'to other'. Also, use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas clearly and avoid awkward phrasing like 'inspiring me to act'.

Exemplo: Yes, I often share my dreams with close friends and family because it helps me feel supported and motivated. Also, sharing dreams with others is a great opportunity to build our future, so it inspires me to take action in many different ways.

Sugestão: In English (Cambodia), improve grammar by using correct plural forms and sentence structures. For example, say 'dreams have special meanings' and use clearer phrases like 'make plans' instead of 'arrangement, the plan'. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, definitely dreams have special meanings because when we have a dream, we set goals and make plans on how to reach them. So, we need to follow these steps carefully until we succeed.

Sugestão: In English (Cambodia), focus on correct verb forms and clearer expressions. For example, say 'if my goal is achieved' instead of 'have been succeed'. Also, avoid double negatives like 'there is no doubt that nothing I cannot do' and use positive expressions.

Exemplo: Yes, I definitely want to make my dream come true because if I achieve my goal in the future, I will live happily and believe that I can do anything. So, if my dream comes true, I will be very glad and happy.

× When I was a child, I often dream about studying abroad because I want to experience a different culture and get a better education.

✓ When I was a child, I often dreamed about studying abroad because I wanted to experience a different culture and get a better education.

The sentence talks about past habitual actions, so the verbs should be in the past tense. 'Dream' should be 'dreamed' and 'want' should be 'wanted' to match the past time frame.

× Extreme motivated me to work hard in school and prepare for my future.

✓ This motivated me to work hard in school and prepare for my future.

The word 'Extreme' is incorrect here and causes confusion. It should be replaced with 'This' to correctly refer to the previous idea and form a proper sentence.

× Yes, I do share my dream with close friends and family quite often because it helped me to feel supported and motivated.

✓ Yes, I do share my dreams with close friends and family quite often because it helps me to feel supported and motivated.

The pronoun 'it' refers to 'sharing dreams' which is plural, so 'dream' should be plural 'dreams'. Also, the verb tense should be present 'helps' to match 'do share'.

× Also, I think that sharing dreams to other is a great opportunity for us to building our future.

✓ Also, I think that sharing dreams with others is a great opportunity for us to build our future.

The correct preposition after 'sharing dreams' is 'with', not 'to'. Also, 'others' should be plural. 'To building' is incorrect; it should be 'to build'.

× I would say it can be inspiring me to act in so many different ways.

✓ I would say it can inspire me to act in so many different ways.

The verb 'inspire' should be used in base form after 'can'. 'Inspiring me' is incorrect here. The adverb placement is corrected by changing the verb form.

× Yes, definitely dream have special meaning because I would say when we have a dream we will set the goal and we make decisions such as arrangement, the plan, what how can we reach that dream.

✓ Yes, definitely dreams have special meanings because I would say when we have a dream we set goals and make decisions such as arrangements, plans, and how we can reach that dream.

The nouns 'dream' and 'meaning' should be plural to match the context. Also, 'goal', 'arrangement', and 'plan' should be plural. The sentence is adjusted for subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× So we need to do that step by step until we got succeed.

✓ So we need to do that step by step until we succeed.

The phrase 'got succeed' is incorrect. The correct form is 'succeed' in present tense after 'until' to indicate the goal to be achieved.

× Yes, I definitely want to make my dream come true because if my goal have been succeed in the future, I would say I will live with happiness and there is no doubt that nothing I cannot do.

✓ Yes, I definitely want to make my dream come true because if my goal has been succeeded in the future, I would say I will live happily and there is no doubt that there is nothing I cannot do.

'Goal' is singular, so the verb should be 'has been'. 'Succeed' should be past participle 'succeeded'. 'Live with happiness' is better expressed as 'live happily'. Also, 'nothing I cannot do' needs 'there is' for correct sentence structure.

× So if my dream comes true, I would be glad and happy.

✓ So if my dream comes true, I will be glad and happy.

The conditional sentence talks about a real future possibility, so the main clause should use 'will' instead of 'would' to match the first conditional form.