Dreams— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details. Avoid repeating words and ensure correct verb tenses.

Exemplo: Yes, I can usually remember my dreams, especially if they are frightening nightmares. These dreams often leave me feeling uneasy, so I like to share them with others to relieve my stress.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about cultural beliefs. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I often share my dreams with my family and husband because it is a common practice in my country. People believe that dreams contain different elements that can bring either good or bad fortune, so we like to discuss their meanings together.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and contains many hesitations and unclear words. Try to speak more fluently and complete your thoughts. Use specific examples and linking words to explain your opinion clearly.

Exemplo: In my country, many people believe that dreams have special meanings. For example, we often search online to understand what our dreams signify, and sometimes we hope that these dreams will come true. However, if I have a nightmare, I usually avoid thinking about it.

Sugestão: Your answer shows good ideas but is interrupted by many hesitations and incomplete sentences. Try to express your thoughts clearly and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid repeating words and finish your sentences fully.

Exemplo: Yes, I want to make my dreams come true because achieving them brings happiness. However, I believe that success depends on hard work rather than chance, so we must work diligently to realise our goals.

× Yes, I recalled that of my dream when I wake up wake up especially when I get horrified.

✓ Yes, I recall my dreams when I wake up, especially when I get horrified.

The verb 'recalled' is in the past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so the present tense 'recall' is appropriate. Also, 'wake up wake up' is repetitive and should be corrected to a single 'wake up'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Some of them I had nightmares and it produced a horrifying atmosphere for me.

✓ Some of them are nightmares and they produce a horrifying atmosphere for me.

The sentence mixes singular and plural forms incorrectly. 'Some of them' refers to multiple dreams, so 'are nightmares' (plural) and 'they produce' (plural) should be used instead of 'had' and 'it produced' which are singular and past tense.

× I like to share my dream with others to relieve my stress.

✓ I like to share my dreams with others to relieve my stress.

The plural 'dreams' fits better here as the context implies multiple dreams. Also, 'relieve my stress' is correct, so no change needed there.

× Yes, I sometimes share my dreams with my loved ones, my husband, my families and we discuss about the dreams and it's common in my country.

✓ Yes, I sometimes share my dreams with my loved ones, my husband, my family, and we discuss the dreams; it's common in my country.

'Families' should be singular 'family' when referring to one's own family. Also, 'discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not require 'about'. The sentence is improved by correcting these errors.

× Most people prefer to share it and they believe that each streams has their own elements and also sometimes they bring fortune and sometimes they bring misfortune for us it.

✓ Most people prefer to share them and they believe that each stream has its own elements; sometimes they bring fortune and sometimes misfortune to us.

'Streams' should be singular 'stream' to match 'each'. 'Their' should be 'its' for singular. 'Share it' should be 'share them' referring to dreams. 'Bring misfortune for us it' is incorrect; corrected to 'bring misfortune to us'. These changes fix number agreement and preposition use.

× Frankly speaking, this topic is common in, uh, my country.

✓ Frankly speaking, this topic is common in my country.

The filler 'uh' is unnecessary and interrupts the sentence flow. Removing it improves clarity.

× Most people believe that each theorem has their own elements and also has their own meaning.

✓ Most people believe that each dream has its own elements and its own meaning.

'Theorem' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'dream'. Also, 'each' requires singular pronouns 'its' instead of 'their'.

× We look for lots of sites to get familiar with, uh, the meaning of these dreams, and we sometimes, uh, make a wish to our dream come true.

✓ We look at lots of sites to get familiar with the meanings of these dreams, and sometimes we make a wish for our dreams to come true.

'Look for' is incorrect here; 'look at' or 'visit' is better. 'Make a wish to our dream come true' is incorrect; it should be 'make a wish for our dreams to come true'. Also, 'meanings' plural fits better.

× Uh, when I have nightmare, I don't like to make a.

✓ When I have a nightmare, I don't like to make a wish.

The sentence is incomplete and missing the object after 'make a'. Adding 'wish' completes the sentence. Also, 'have nightmare' should be 'have a nightmare'.

× In some cases, I like to, uh, make my dream come true, uh, because it produces joyful atmosphere.

✓ In some cases, I like to make my dream come true because it produces a joyful atmosphere.

Removing filler 'uh' improves clarity. Also, 'joyful atmosphere' needs the article 'a' before it.

× Uh, but uh, uh, it may occur by the chance.

✓ But it may occur by chance.

Removing filler words 'uh' improves clarity. Also, 'by the chance' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'by chance'.

× I believe that, uh, we have to work from dawn to dusk and by hardworking, we can make our dreams to come.

✓ I believe that we have to work from dawn to dusk, and by working hard, we can make our dreams come true.

'By hardworking' is incorrect; it should be 'by working hard'. Also, 'make our dreams to come' is incorrect; it should be 'make our dreams come true'.

× Uh, we cannot, uh, we cannot rely on our.

✓ We cannot rely on luck alone.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'luck alone' completes the thought logically and grammatically.