Dreams— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“pretty wanted”应为“really wanted”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法准确性，同时回答应更简洁，避免冗余。

Exemplo: Yes, I can remember my dreams clearly. When I was young, I really wanted to become a writer because I loved traveling and wanted to gain experiences to write interesting articles.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“persist it”和“be alright”用词不当。建议使用更准确的词汇表达，并且结构更清晰，避免模糊的表达。

Exemplo: Yes, I have shared my dreams with close friends before. They support me to keep pursuing my goals, and if I have the chance, I hope to succeed in the future.

Sugestão: 回答较为自然，但句子结构可以更流畅，且“dream”和“dreams”混用，建议统一用复数形式。可以增加连接词使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I personally believe that dreams have special meanings because they give people energy and motivation to pursue their dreams, ideal goals, and careers.

Sugestão: 回答中存在重复词汇（"I I"），语法错误（"everyone want"应为"everyone wants"），表达不够简洁。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并使句子更简洁流畅。

Exemplo: Definitely yes. I believe everyone wants to achieve their dreams, but I know it is challenging. Therefore, I need to work hard and manage my current life first. If possible, I will try to achieve my dreams in the future.

× When I was young, I pretty wanted to become a writer in the future because I wanted to travel to different places and enhance my experience to write articles.

✓ When I was young, I pretty much wanted to become a writer in the future because I wanted to travel to different places and enhance my experience to write articles.

这里的错误是副词使用不当，'pretty' 应该用作 'pretty much' 来修饰动词，表示'相当想要'。需要加上 'much' 使表达更准确。

× Yes, I shared my dream to close friends before UMM.

✓ Yes, I shared my dream with close friends before UMM.

动词 'share' 后面应接介词 'with' 来表示与谁分享，'to' 用法错误。

× They support me to persist it and if I have chance, I would like to be alright in the future.

✓ They support me to persist in it and if I have a chance, I would like to be alright in the future.

动词 'persist' 后应接介词 'in'，表示坚持某事；'have chance' 缺少冠词 'a'，应为 'have a chance'。

× I believe everyone want to achieve their dreams if they have but I I know it's challenging for me so I need to work hard and afford my current life first.

✓ I believe everyone wants to achieve their dreams if they have them, but I know it's challenging for me so I need to work hard and afford my current life first.

主语 'everyone' 是单数，动词应使用第三人称单数形式 'wants'；'if they have' 后缺少宾语，应补充 'them'。

× If possible I will try to achieve it in the future.

✓ If possible, I will try to achieve it in the future.

句首 'If possible' 后应加逗号，表示条件状语与主句分开，增强句子清晰度。