Dreams— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevap doğal ve anlaşılır, ancak dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. Cümle yapısını düzeltin (ör. tense uyumu: "I was dreaming" → "I dreamed" veya "I used to dream"), gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın ve cevap uzunluğunu 2–4 cümle arasında tutun. Ayrıca bağlaçlar kullanarak fikirleri daha akıcı bağlayın (ör. "because" yerine "because" doğru kullanımıyla). Örneğin geçmişten bahsederken daha belirgin zaman ifadeleri ekleyin ("when I was a child").

Exemplo: Yes, I can. When I was a child I used to dream of becoming a doctor because I enjoyed helping sick people. However, I have drifted away from that goal as my interests changed.

Sugestão: Cümlelerdeki dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin (infinitive kullanımı: "like share" → "like to share", "listen other people's dream" → "listen to other people's dreams", "giving" → "give"). Konuşma sırasında dolgu kelimelerini ("you know", "like") azaltın. Mantıksal bağlam için kısa bir sebep cümlesiyle destekleyin. Cevap 2–3 cümleyle net olmalı ve bağlaçlarla akıcılık sağlanmalı.

Exemplo: I usually don’t like to share my dreams because I worry others might laugh or judge me. However, I enjoy listening to other people’s dreams and sometimes giving them advice, depending on how well I know the person.

Sugestão: Fikir net ancak dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimi hataları var ("the dreams shows" → "dreams show", "doing art" → "creating art" veya "artistic pursuits"). Daha güçlü bir örnek verin ve nedenini kısaca açıklayın. Bağlaç kullanarak sebep-sonuç ilişkisini belirtin.

Exemplo: Yes, I think dreams can reflect a person’s interests or emotions. For instance, if someone often dreams about singing, it may indicate an interest in music or a desire to perform.

Sugestão: Cümlede zaman uyumsuzluğu var ("I working" → "I am working" veya "I work"). Cevabı genişletmek için kısa bir yöntem veya örnek ekleyin (ne yaptığınız: "studying", "practicing"). Böylece cevap daha inandırıcı ve özgün olur.

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. I want to achieve my dreams, and I am working hard by studying regularly and practising relevant skills to reach my goals.

× Yes, I really remember them.

✓ Yes, I remember them very well.

The original 'really remember' is not ungrammatical but 'remember them very well' is more natural in present tense; use adverb placement after auxiliary or before main verb for clarity.

× For example, when I was a kid I was dreaming about being a doctor 'cause when I was young I really liked helping other people, especially when they're sick.

✓ For example, when I was a kid I dreamed about being a doctor because when I was young I really liked helping other people, especially when they were sick.

Use simple past 'dreamed' for completed past actions rather than past progressive 'was dreaming'. Also use 'because' in full form. Maintain past tense consistency: change 'they're sick' to past 'they were sick.'

× But now I'm really far away from my dream.

✓ But now I'm really far from my dream.

Use 'far from' not 'far away from' when referring to being distant from an abstract idea like a dream; present continuous 'I'm' with adjective 'far' is correct.

× I really don't like share my dreams with other people 'cause you know, I'm scared of like if they're gonna make fun of me or judge me.

✓ I really don't like to share my dreams with other people because I'm afraid they will make fun of me or judge me.

After 'don't like' use the infinitive 'to share' or gerund 'sharing'; 'scared of' should be followed by a noun/gerund, but here 'afraid' + clause 'they will' is more natural. Avoid colloquial 'gonna' and filler 'like.' Use 'because' instead of informal 'cause.'

× But I really like to listen other people's dream and giving advice to them.

✓ But I really like listening to other people's dreams and giving them advice.

After 'like' you can use gerund 'listening'. 'Listen to' requires preposition 'to'. 'Dream' should be plural 'dreams' to match 'other people', and 'giving advice to them' is better as 'giving them advice.'

× I guess it depends on the person who I'm talking to.

✓ I guess it depends on the person I'm talking to.

Omit 'who' in this relative clause; use reduced relative clause 'the person I'm talking to.' This is more natural in spoken English.

× Yes, I think they have because the dreams shows the people who they are.

✓ Yes, I think they do because dreams show the kind of people they are.

Use auxiliary 'do' for short answers 'think they do'. 'Dreams' is plural so the verb should be 'show' not 'shows'. Rephrase for clarity: 'the kind of people they are.'

× For example, if a person dreams about being a singer and it shows that he or she likes art, doing art.

✓ For example, if a person dreams about being a singer, it shows that he or she likes art or wants to do art.

Add comma after clause. 'Doing art' is awkward; use 'likes art' or 'wants to do art' for clarity. Maintain pronoun agreement.

× Of course I want to make my dreams come true and I working so hard for that.

✓ Of course I want to make my dreams come true and I am working so hard for that.

The verb 'working' requires the auxiliary 'am' to form present continuous 'I am working.' This maintains tense consistency with the desire expressed earlier.