Emails— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve the natural flow and clarity of your answer by using correct verb tenses and more precise vocabulary. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: No, I don't send emails often anymore because my current job doesn't require it. However, when I was at university, I used emails much more frequently to communicate with professors and classmates.

Sugestão: Focus on using correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, be specific about the situations when you send emails.

Exemplo: I rarely send emails nowadays, but when I do, they are usually related to work, such as requesting meetings or sharing important information.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Use complete sentences and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion. Avoid incomplete thoughts.

Exemplo: China is a very developed country, and many people use emails frequently for business and personal communication because of the fast-paced lifestyle.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and coherence by using linking words and complete sentences. Clearly express your opinion with specific examples.

Exemplo: I believe that in the future, people will prefer faster communication methods than emails, such as phone calls, instant messaging, or chat applications.

× I think I lose this type of task since I change my type of work.

✓ I think I lost this type of task since I changed my type of work.

The verbs 'lose' and 'change' should be in the past tense 'lost' and 'changed' because the sentence refers to a past event. Using past tense maintains correct temporal consistency.

× I use it very far more frequently.

✓ I used it much more frequently.

The verb 'use' should be in the past tense 'used' to match the past time frame indicated by 'when I was in university'. Also, 'very far more' is incorrect; 'much more' is the correct adverbial phrase.

× Uh, it happen rarely.

✓ Uh, it happens rarely.

The verb 'happen' should be in the third person singular present tense 'happens' to agree with the subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× And he's a sporadic.

✓ And it's a sporadic task.

The pronoun 'he's' is incorrect here; it should be 'it's' referring to 'task'. Also, 'sporadic' is an adjective and needs a noun to modify; adding 'task' clarifies the meaning.

× Task that I do but when I send an e-mail.

✓ It's a task that I do, but when I send an e-mail,

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject. Adding 'It's' and proper punctuation improves sentence structure and clarity.

× Are related strictly to work or request about meeting.

✓ They are related strictly to work or requests about meetings.

The sentence lacks a subject; 'They' is added. 'Request' should be plural 'requests' to match 'work'. Also, 'about meeting' should be 'about meetings' for correct plural form and preposition usage.

× China has. Very rich country.

✓ China is a very rich country.

The original is a sentence fragment. 'China has.' is incomplete. Correcting to 'China is a very rich country.' forms a complete sentence with proper subject and verb.

× I think people there communicate. More frequently with emails.

✓ I think people there communicate more frequently with emails.

The sentence is split incorrectly. Combining into one sentence improves flow and clarity.

× And is something related to the type of.

✓ And it is something related to the type of communication.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject. Adding 'it' and completing the phrase clarifies the meaning.

× I think in the future people will. Try to communicate faster than the mail.

✓ I think in the future people will try to communicate faster than by mail.

The sentence is split incorrectly. 'Will try' should be together. Also, 'than the mail' should be 'than by mail' for correct comparison and preposition.

× Ann for example. By calling or. Chats. Or writing in chats? Like what?

✓ For example, by calling, chatting, or writing in chats.

The original is fragmented and unclear. Combining into a single sentence with proper conjunctions and punctuation improves clarity.