Emails— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答不够自然流畅，语法错误较多，表达重复且不够简洁。建议练习使用简单明了的句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意时态一致。

Exemplo: Yes, I often sent emails when I was working because it was a convenient way to communicate with customers and keep in touch.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议练习完整表达观点，使用连接词使句子连贯，并注意句子完整性。

Exemplo: I usually sent emails to my customers during work because it was convenient and allowed them to respond at their own time without interruptions.

Sugestão: 表达较为清晰，但语法和用词有误，且句子结构简单。建议加强语法练习，使用更准确的词汇，并尝试丰富句型。

Exemplo: I don't think emails are very popular in China because, in my opinion, people prefer sending messages on their mobile phones since emails are considered more formal.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且表达不流畅，缺少句子结尾。建议练习完整表达观点，注意句子完整性和逻辑连贯。

Exemplo: I believe emails will become more popular in the future, especially in work settings, because they are convenient and allow people to explain details clearly.

× Yes, I send emails when I was working we would like we would like to send emails to customers or to exchange messages and it is the very convenient to for us to keep in touch.

✓ Yes, I sent emails when I was working. We would like to send emails to customers or to exchange messages, and it is very convenient for us to keep in touch.

句子中描述过去的动作，应使用过去时态。'send' 应改为 'sent'。另外，句子结构混乱，需分句并调整词序，使表达更清晰。

× As I just said, when I was working I would send emails to my customers because it is very convenient and we can get and not disturbed so much and if the customer can respond to the.

✓ As I just said, when I was working I would send emails to my customers because it was very convenient and we could get responses without being disturbed so much, and if the customer could respond.

描述过去的情况，动词时态应保持一致，'is' 和 'can' 应改为过去时 'was' 和 'could'。句子末尾不完整，需补充完整表达。

× Emails is much more formal to normal people.

✓ Emails are much more formal to normal people.

'Emails' 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 'are'，而不是单数 'is'。

× I think it will be more popular in the future in the working occasions because it is so convenient and you can explain details to the others just in.

✓ I think it will be more popular in the future in working occasions because it is so convenient and you can explain details to others just in time.

句子中 'in the working occasions' 应改为 'in working occasions' 更自然；'the others' 改为 'others'；句尾不完整，补充 'just in time' 使表达完整。