Emails— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答较为自然且直接，但可以更简洁，避免重复表达“send emails”和“sending messages”。建议用更丰富的词汇表达偏好，并适当使用连接词使回答更流畅。

Exemplo: No, I seldom send emails because I find messaging apps more convenient for keeping in touch with my friends.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误（如冠词使用错误和动词形式），且句子结构较简单。建议注意语法准确性，使用连接词丰富句子，并提供更具体的细节。

Exemplo: I usually send emails to my teacher when submitting homework or essays, as she requires us to upload assignments via email.

Sugestão: 回答语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议加强语法练习，使用连接词使表达更连贯，并提供具体原因和例子。

Exemplo: No, sending emails is not very popular in China because most people prefer using social media apps like WeChat to send messages and documents, as these platforms are more user-friendly and faster.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使用连接词使观点更连贯，并举例说明。

Exemplo: I believe emails will become less popular in the future because people prefer using social media apps like QQ or WeChat, which allow them to send not only messages but also videos conveniently.

× I usually send an emails to my teacher because my teacher required us upload our homework and essays to her on e-mail.

✓ I usually send emails to my teacher because my teacher required us to upload our homework and essays to her by e-mail.

这里“an emails”中“emails”是复数，前面不应该用不定冠词“an”，应直接用复数形式“emails”。

× I usually send an emails to my teacher because my teacher required us upload our homework and essays to her on e-mail.

✓ I usually send emails to my teacher because my teacher required us to upload our homework and essays to her by e-mail.

“required us upload”缺少不定式“to”，正确用法是“required us to upload”。

× I usually send an emails to my teacher because my teacher required us upload our homework and essays to her on e-mail.

✓ I usually send emails to my teacher because my teacher required us to upload our homework and essays to her by e-mail.

“to her on e-mail”中“on e-mail”用法不当，应该用“by e-mail”表示通过电子邮件。

× No, I think send e-mail not supposedly because for most of Chinese people they prefer you the social media to send a document or the messages.

✓ No, I think sending e-mail is not popular because most Chinese people prefer to use social media to send documents or messages.

“think send e-mail”中“send”应改为动名词“sending”作宾语。

× No, I think send e-mail not supposedly because for most of Chinese people they prefer you the social media to send a document or the messages.

✓ No, I think sending e-mail is not popular because most Chinese people prefer to use social media to send documents or messages.

“for most of Chinese people”中“of”多余，正确表达是“most Chinese people”。

× No, I think send e-mail not supposedly because for most of Chinese people they prefer you the social media to send a document or the messages.

✓ No, I think sending e-mail is not popular because most Chinese people prefer to use social media to send documents or messages.

“they prefer you the social media”中“you”用法错误，应去掉，改为“prefer to use social media”。

× They think e-mail not so convenient because it's it's new applications and need more procedures.

✓ They think e-mail is not so convenient because it is a new application and needs more procedures.

“it's it's new applications”重复且“applications”应为单数“application”，且缺少动词“is”。

× They think e-mail not so convenient because it's it's new applications and need more procedures.

✓ They think e-mail is not so convenient because it is a new application and needs more procedures.

“need more procedures”主语是单数“it”，动词应加-s，变为“needs”。

× I think send emails will be less popular due to the technology.

✓ I think sending emails will be less popular due to technology.

“think send emails”中“send”应改为动名词“sending”作宾语。

× I think send emails will be less popular due to the technology.

✓ I think sending emails will be less popular due to technology.

“the technology”前不需要定冠词“the”，应直接用“technology”。

× People prefer sending messages and documented on the new application and social media such as QQ or WeChat.

✓ People prefer sending messages and documents on new applications and social media such as QQ or WeChat.

“documented”应为名词“documents”，且“the new application”应为复数“new applications”。

× It's more convenient because you not only can send an e-mail but also you can send some videos.

✓ It's more convenient because you can not only send an e-mail but also send some videos.

“you not only can send”语序错误，正确语序是“you can not only send”。