Emails— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, correct grammar and sentence structure will improve your score.

Exemplo: I rarely send emails because I only use them when necessary. For example, if my college requires important information, I will send an email. Otherwise, I prefer other communication methods.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to make your response more coherent. Also, avoid minor grammatical errors and clarify who 'ADIR' is if possible.

Exemplo: I usually send emails to my college administration when there is urgent or important information to share. However, I prefer talking in person or using messaging apps for quick communication.

Sugestão: Your answer is honest but could be improved by structuring your response better and using more natural English. Try to avoid awkward phrasing and provide a brief explanation.

Exemplo: I'm not sure how popular emails are in China because I'm not Chinese. However, I believe that emails are commonly used for professional communication there.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and fluency. Try to organise your thoughts clearly, avoid hesitation, and use linking words to connect your points logically.

Exemplo: I think emails will become less popular for everyday communication because people prefer instant messaging. However, emails will still be important for professional and formal communication in the future.

× I rarely send e-mail because I just send e-mail.

✓ I rarely send emails because I only send emails when necessary.

The original sentence uses 'e-mail' inconsistently and awkwardly. 'Emails' is the plural form and more natural here. Also, 'just send e-mail' is vague and unclear. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses the correct plural form.

× If my college needs which is not really.

✓ If my colleague needs something, which is not often the case.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'College' is likely a misspelling of 'colleague'. The phrase 'which is not really' is incomplete and needs clarification. The correction completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× If not really important I don't send e-mail.

✓ If it is not really important, I don't send emails.

The original sentence lacks the subject 'it' and the verb 'is' in the conditional clause, making it grammatically incorrect. Adding 'it is' corrects the sentence structure.

× But it's really crucial thing that I need to send e-mail.

✓ But it's a really crucial thing that I need to send an email.

The phrase 'crucial thing' needs an article 'a' before it. Also, 'e-mail' should be 'an email' for singular countable noun. The correction adds the necessary articles.

× I will send e-mail.

✓ I will send an email.

'E-mail' should be 'an email' as a singular countable noun. The future tense 'will send' is correct.

× I just send emails to ADIR.

✓ I just send emails to ADIR.

No correction needed here as 'emails' is correctly plural and the sentence is grammatically correct.

× If my college needs important information or something is urgent, I make sure to send an e-mail.

✓ If my colleague needs important information or something is urgent, I make sure to send an email.

'College' should be 'colleague' to refer to a person. 'E-mail' can be written as 'email' for consistency. The rest is correct.

× But I prefer to talk in person or quick message instead through other methods like messaging apps, not by emails.

✓ But I prefer to talk in person or send a quick message instead of using other methods like messaging apps, not emails.

The phrase 'prefer to talk in person or quick message instead through other methods' is awkward and incorrect. 'Instead of using' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'by emails' should be 'emails' without 'by'.

× Actually I'm not really sure that emails popular in China or not because I'm not Chinese, so I don't know about what truly situation in there happened.

✓ Actually, I'm not really sure whether emails are popular in China or not because I'm not Chinese, so I don't know the true situation there.

The original sentence has multiple errors: missing 'whether' to introduce the clause, missing verb 'are' after 'emails', awkward phrasing 'about what truly situation in there happened'. The correction fixes these issues for clarity and correctness.

× I, I definitely think yes, because people might prefer instant messaging, offer emails for everyday communication.

✓ I definitely think so because people might prefer instant messaging over emails for everyday communication.

The original sentence uses 'offer' incorrectly; it should be 'over' to indicate preference. Also, 'think yes' is unnatural; 'think so' is the correct expression.

× But yeah, emails still are probably used in professional settings or maybe for, for formal communication if we wanted to send, uh, formal letter, but for the daily.

✓ But yeah, emails are still probably used in professional settings or maybe for formal communication if we want to send a formal letter, but not for daily use.

The sentence mixes tenses ('wanted' should be 'want') and is incomplete at the end. 'Formal letter' needs an article 'a'. The correction adjusts tense consistency and completes the thought.