Emails— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "extending purpose" and "to to call the project." Try to use clearer and more natural expressions, and avoid repetition. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, I often send emails, especially for work purposes. Emails are a convenient way to communicate quickly and keep a record of important information. For example, I regularly email my colleagues to discuss project details and share updates.

Sugestão: Your answer has unclear and awkward phrases such as "most likely to attract their inboxes" and "my e-mail calling address." Try to use more natural expressions and provide clear supporting details with appropriate linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I usually send emails during working hours, especially in the morning or early afternoon, when people are more likely to check their inboxes. For example, I send emails to share important updates or ask questions related to a project.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors like "sending emails are" instead of "sending emails is." Also, avoid vague phrases like "it was easy to answer people's questions." Use clearer and more precise language to explain your points.

Exemplo: No, sending emails is not very popular in China. Instead, people prefer using social media apps like WeChat because it is easier and faster to communicate and answer questions there.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains several grammatical mistakes and awkward phrases such as "any e-mail would be less popular" and "People prefer Google and more and directly for to communicate." Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct grammar and vocabulary. Also, provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Exemplo: I believe that sending emails will become less popular in the future because messaging apps and social media platforms offer faster and more direct communication. For example, many people now use apps like WhatsApp or WeChat to chat instantly instead of sending emails.

× Yes, I often send emails, especially for work and extending purpose.

✓ Yes, I often send emails, especially for work and extending purposes.

The word 'purpose' should be plural 'purposes' because it refers to more than one reason or aim. Using the plural form correctly matches the context of multiple reasons for sending emails.

× Emails are a convenient way to communicate quickly and keep record of important information.

✓ Emails are a convenient way to communicate quickly and keep a record of important information.

The phrase 'keep record' is missing the article 'a'. The correct expression is 'keep a record' to indicate maintaining a single record of information.

× For example, I regularly e-mail my colleagues to to call the project and share updates.

✓ For example, I regularly e-mail my colleagues to call the project and share updates.

There is a repeated word 'to to' which is a typographical error. Removing the extra 'to' corrects the sentence. Also, 'call the project' is unclear; it might be a misuse but since it is not in the grammar problem list, only the repeated 'to' is corrected.

× I usually send emails during working hours, especially in the morning or afternoon or early afternoon when people are most likely to attract their inboxes.

✓ I usually send emails during working hours, especially in the morning or early afternoon when people are most likely to check their inboxes.

The phrase 'attract their inboxes' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'check' when referring to looking at emails. Also, 'or afternoon or early afternoon' is redundant; 'morning or early afternoon' is clearer.

× For example, my e-mail calling address to share important update or ask questions related to a project.

✓ For example, I use my e-mail address to share important updates or ask questions related to a project.

The original sentence lacks a proper verb and subject, making it incomplete. Adding 'I use' and correcting 'calling address' to 'e-mail address' and pluralizing 'update' to 'updates' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, sending emails are not popular in China.

✓ No, sending emails is not popular in China.

The subject 'sending emails' is singular (gerund phrase), so the verb should be singular 'is' instead of 'are' to agree in number.

× We have our own social media apps such as WeChat, and WeChat is more popular in China because it was easy to answer people's questions.

✓ We have our own social media apps such as WeChat, and WeChat is more popular in China because it is easy to answer people's questions.

The verb tense 'was' is incorrect here because the sentence refers to a current fact. It should be 'is' to indicate present tense.

× I believe that any e-mail would be less popular in the future with the rise of English system messaging apps and social media platforms.

✓ I believe that e-mail will be less popular in the future with the rise of instant messaging apps and social media platforms.

The modal verb 'would' is less appropriate here because the speaker expresses a belief about a future event. 'Will' is the correct modal verb to indicate future certainty. Also, 'any e-mail' is awkward; 'e-mail' without 'any' is better. 'English system messaging apps' seems incorrect; 'instant messaging apps' is likely intended.

× People prefer Google and more and directly for to communicate.

✓ People prefer Google and other platforms to communicate more directly.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Rearranging the sentence to 'People prefer Google and other platforms to communicate more directly' corrects the structure and clarifies the meaning.