Emails— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., tense, articles, word order) and avoid repetition. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Not really. I rarely send emails nowadays because I mainly use social media to contact friends and coworkers. For example, messaging apps are faster and allow me to send photos and voice notes instantly, so I find them more convenient than email.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence then two clear supporting reasons with correct tense and simpler phrasing. Use linking words (because, so, therefore) and avoid long repeated clauses. Mention a typical situation when you actually use email.

Exemplo: I usually send emails in the evening. Because I study in the morning when I'm most alert, I prefer to deal with administrative tasks like emailing later; by evening I have time to compose messages clearly, whereas in the morning I'm focused on studying.

Sugestão: Start with a clear opinion, then support it with specific, concise reasons and examples. Reduce hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., subject-verb agreement). Mention specific platforms used in China (e.g., WeChat) to be more accurate and relevant.

Exemplo: No, emailing is not very popular in China. Most people prefer instant messaging apps such as WeChat because they are more convenient and support features like voice messages and photo sharing for quick, casual communication.

Sugestão: Give a direct prediction followed by one or two clear reasons using linking words. Fix grammar and make the final statement coherent. Mention contexts where email will remain common (e.g., professional or formal communication) to show balanced reasoning.

Exemplo: I think emails will become less popular for everyday use because people prefer instant messaging apps for casual conversations. However, emails will still be common for formal or professional communication, such as work correspondence and official documents.

× I don't send emails recently because I use social media instead.

✓ I haven't been sending emails recently because I use social media instead.

The sentence refers to a recent time period continuing to now, so present perfect continuous (have/has been + -ing) or present perfect is appropriate. Using simple present 'don't send' incorrectly implies a habitual action. Use 'haven't been sending' to show a change in recent behavior.

× So I quite often use social media as a sending message to my friends and Co workers which is really useful for me because it's really fast in replying and it's really easy to open the message actually.

✓ So I quite often use social media to send messages to my friends and co-workers, which is really useful for me because it is fast for replying and it is easy to open messages.

Errors: 'a sending message' is incorrect noun phrase; use 'to send messages' (infinitive + plural noun). 'Co workers' should be 'co-workers' or 'coworkers'. 'It's really fast in replying' is ungrammatical; use 'it is fast for replying' or 'response is fast'. Also keep plurals consistent: 'messages' and 'messages'.

× I like to send emails to others in the evening because I prefer to studying on the UH in the morning, because in that morning I can concentrate better than evening time because I'm refreshed after The Walking.

✓ I like to send emails in the evening because I prefer studying in the morning, since I can concentrate better then because I am refreshed after walking.

'prefer to studying' mixes 'prefer to' with gerund; use 'prefer studying' or 'prefer to study'. 'on the UH' and 'The Walking' are unclear; assumed 'in the morning' and 'walking' as activity. Capitalization errors removed. Use 'then' for time comparison and maintain simple present for habits.

× I waking up so and and other evening I'm really quite tired, so I cannot focus on my studying.

✓ When I wake up early I feel refreshed, and in the evening I am quite tired, so I cannot focus on my studying.

'I waking up' is incorrect; use base form 'wake' with auxiliary if needed. Sentence needed restructuring for clarity: contrast morning and evening. 'cannot focus on my studying' is acceptable but improved by smoothing clause order.

× I it's not popular sending emails because the China in China, many people use some social media media like Instagram or WhatsApp as a messaging to others.

✓ It's not popular to send emails in China; many people use social media like Instagram or WhatsApp to message others.

Remove redundant pronouns and words: 'I it's' incorrect; 'the China in China' is wrong. Use 'in China' and 'to message others' for correct verb and pronoun use. Also remove duplicate 'media'.

× Uh, it's really more, it's more convenient than sending an e-mail because the social media application offers there to, uh, some opportunity to send some pictures and voice message.

✓ It is more convenient than sending an email because social media applications allow you to send pictures and voice messages.

'an e-mail' fine but 'the social media application offers there to' is incorrect word order and article use. Use plural 'applications' and correct verb 'allow you to send'. Use plural 'voice messages' and avoid filler words.

× I think it will be less in the future because people tend to use some instant social media or something other application as a communications tools and sending emails is used for some job especially.

✓ I think email will be less popular in the future because people tend to use instant social media or other apps for communication, and email is mainly used for work.

'It will be less' is vague; specify 'email will be less popular'. 'something other application' incorrect—use 'other apps'. 'communications tools' should be 'communication' or 'communication tools'. Maintain future prediction with 'will' and correct noun forms.

× So I think normally they no more private time you people used to send.

✓ So I think normally people will no longer use email for private matters.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. Rephrase to express the intended meaning: 'people will no longer use email for private matters.' Use 'no longer' for cessation and correct subject-verb order.