Talents— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating your talent and giving specific examples. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

Exemplo: Yes, I am good at cooking. My mother taught me various recipes, and I can prepare different types of food such as Chinese and Spanish dishes.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to clearly state when you learned cooking and explain briefly how your interest developed, using linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: When I was young, I wasn't interested in cooking. However, as I grew older, my mother taught me cooking skills, and now I have mastered them, which I believe will be useful in the future.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically, using linking words to connect your thoughts.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe my cooking skills will be very useful in the future because I plan to study abroad. Since I will live alone, I need to cook for myself.

Sugestão: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Try to clearly state who in your family shares your talent and provide specific details.

Exemplo: In my family, my mother and grandmother are also good at cooking. They have managed their households well and taught me many recipes.

× There are lot of talent inside me but I mostly referred to make a food and help my mother during her cooking skills are also my mother taught me different types of food that I can make.

✓ There is a lot of talent inside me, but I mostly refer to making food and helping my mother. Her cooking skills are good, and my mother taught me different types of food that I can make.

The phrase 'There are lot of talent' is incorrect because 'talent' is an uncountable noun and requires 'There is a lot of' instead of 'There are lot of'. Also, 'make a food' is incorrect; 'make food' or 'making food' is correct. The sentence structure is confusing and needs to be split for clarity.

× There are lot of talent inside me but I mostly referred to make a food and help my mother during her cooking skills are also my mother taught me different types of food that I can make.

✓ There is a lot of talent inside me, but I mostly refer to making food and helping my mother. Her cooking skills are good, and my mother taught me different types of food that I can make.

After the verb 'refer', the correct form is 'refer to making' (verb + -ing form), not 'referred to make'. Also, 'help my mother during her cooking skills' is unclear; it should be 'helping my mother'.

× Usually when I was younger I have no interest in cooking or any household chores but as I become more mature now than I have mastered degree from my mother as she teach you me the cooking skills that would be when official to me in my future.

✓ Usually, when I was younger, I had no interest in cooking or any household chores, but as I became more mature, I have mastered skills from my mother as she taught me cooking skills that will be useful to me in the future.

The sentence mixes tenses incorrectly. 'I have no interest' should be past tense 'I had no interest' to match 'when I was younger'. 'As I become' should be 'as I became'. 'She teach you me' is incorrect; it should be 'she taught me'. 'That would be when official to me' is unclear and corrected to 'that will be useful to me'.

× Yes, so I might think this talent was would be very suitable and beneficial to me in my future as I want to go abroad for further studies due to which I have to live alone or any companion would be there in my countryside but I have to cook myself and field.

✓ Yes, I think this talent would be very suitable and beneficial to me in the future as I want to go abroad for further studies, where I will have to live alone without any companion in my hometown, so I have to cook for myself.

The phrase 'might think this talent was would be' is incorrect; 'I think this talent would be' is correct. 'Due to which' is awkward; 'where' fits better. 'Any companion would be there' should be 'without any companion'. 'Cook myself and field' is unclear and corrected to 'cook for myself'.

× In my family there are 8 members from which with real students are my father and uncle are working in farming but my heart and mother or as well as my grandmother know this Tia talented as the they have run other houses in their own time.

✓ In my family, there are 8 members, among whom my father and uncle work in farming, but my heart, mother, and grandmother are talented in this area as they have managed other households in their own time.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'with real students are my father and uncle' is unclear and likely incorrect. 'My heart' is probably a mishearing or typo for 'my aunt' or another relative. 'Know this Tia talented' is unclear; corrected to 'are talented in this area'. 'They have run other houses' is better as 'managed other households'. The sentence also needs commas for clarity.