Talents— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语法和用词不够准确，表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，避免重复表达，并且注意句子结构的完整性。

Exemplo: I am good at music, especially singing. When I was young, I really enjoyed singing, and my classmates often asked me to perform for them.

Sugestão: 回答内容不清晰，存在词汇错误和语法错误，导致表达含糊。建议使用正确的词汇表达时间和经历，并且注意句子结构的完整性。

Exemplo: My parents said I showed talent in singing when I was a child because we often went to karaoke rooms in the city, and I enjoyed singing there.

Sugestão: 回答较长且有些重复，表达不够简洁。建议直接回答问题，使用连接词使表达更连贯，并简洁说明理由。

Exemplo: I don't think my singing talent will be useful in my future work because I enjoy my current job and don't plan to change it. However, I might use it as a hobby.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，避免重复，并且使句子更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. My parents and uncle are also good at singing. Sometimes, when we go to karaoke rooms together, we all enjoy singing, which is quite fun.

× I pretty liked to sing songs.

✓ I pretty liked singing songs.

这里动词like后面应该接动名词形式（-ing），而不是不定式。正确用法是like doing something。

× My classmates always ask me to sing songs for them.

✓ My classmates always ask me to sing songs for them.

此句中主语是复数（my classmates），动词ask不需要加s，原句正确，无需修改。

× My parents always said I was marketing when I was little child because we had a karaoke sites in the city room.

✓ My parents always said I was singing when I was a little child because we had a karaoke site in the city room.

1. 'marketing' 应为 'singing'，可能是拼写错误。2. 'little child' 前应加冠词 'a'。3. 'karaoke sites' 应为单数 'karaoke site'，因为后文是指一个地方。

× I often enjoy seeing songs to them.

✓ I often enjoy singing songs to them.

动词enjoy后应接动名词形式，且 'seeing songs' 不合适，应为 'singing songs'。

× Personally I don't think this talent can be used on my work in the future because my current job is enjoyable and I like it personally so I don't think I will change my job but who knows.

✓ Personally, I don't think this talent can be used in my work in the future because my current job is enjoyable and I like it personally, so I don't think I will change my job, but who knows.

1. 'used on my work' 应改为 'used in my work'，介词用法错误。2. 句子较长，建议加逗号分隔，使句子更通顺。

× Sometimes when we went to karaoke room, all all of us enjoy seeing songs.

✓ Sometimes when we went to the karaoke room, all of us enjoyed singing songs.

1. 'karaoke room' 前应加定冠词 'the'。2. 句子时态应统一，前半句是过去时，后半句也应为过去时 'enjoyed'。3. 'seeing songs' 应为 'singing songs'。4. 重复 'all' 应去掉一个。