Computers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and clear. Start with a topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two specific conditions and a brief reason using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases like “fresh conditions” or “interesting” used twice.

Exemplo: I usually use a computer when I need to work, study, or communicate with others. For example, I use it for writing essays and doing research, and I also use video calls to speak with my classmates. Because it is faster and stores my files, it makes these tasks much easier.

Sugestão: Give a clear time reference and a concise description of the context. Use correct tense and phrasing (e.g., “the first time I used a computer was…”). Add one specific detail about what you did with the computer then.

Exemplo: The first time I used a computer was last year, right after I finished my intermediate studies. At that time I used it mostly to learn basic typing and to browse educational websites, which helped me with my courses.

Sugestão: Avoid unclear or offensive expressions. Answer directly with a topic sentence about how your life would change, then give two specific, realistic consequences using linking words like “because” or “so”. Keep sentences concise and respectful.

Exemplo: Without a computer, my daily life would be much more difficult because I would lose access to online learning and communication tools. For example, I would have trouble submitting assignments and staying in touch with friends, so I would need to rely more on paper and face-to-face meetings.

Sugestão: State the specific situations clearly and give concise reasons. Use correct tense and natural phrases (e.g., “I find it difficult when…”). Provide one or two concrete examples of difficulties and, if possible, a brief mention of how you cope or how it improves.

Exemplo: I find it difficult to use a computer when I am new to a device or software because I don’t know the keyboard shortcuts and the interface is unfamiliar. For instance, when I first used a new laptop I struggled with the touchpad settings, but I improved after practicing and changing the keyboard layout.

× I use a fresh conditions computer because it's much more easy and also interesting to carry out any functions, so it's very interesting.

✓ I use a computer in good condition because it is much easier and more interesting to perform tasks.

The original sentence misuses articles and modifiers ('a fresh conditions computer') and has awkward phrasing. Use the article 'a' before singular noun and a clear adjective phrase: 'a computer in good condition' or 'a new computer'. Also correct comparative/adverb form: 'much easier' (not 'much more easy') and use 'perform tasks' instead of 'carry out any functions'. Remove redundant 'so it's very interesting' and replace with concise wording. Suggestion: simplify descriptions and use correct adjective/adverb forms.

× Speaking of the first time, it would possibly the last year when I initially utilized a computer, more specifically after my completing intermediate level.

✓ Speaking of the first time, it was probably last year when I first used a computer, specifically after completing my intermediate level.

The sentence uses incorrect modal/time expressions and verb forms. Use simple past 'it was' and 'used' for past events. 'Would possibly' is incorrect; use 'probably'. 'Initially utilized' is awkward; use 'first used'. 'After my completing intermediate level' should be 'after completing my intermediate level' or 'after I completed my intermediate level'. Ensure tense consistency and natural phrasing.

× Without computer my live would be like as a historical human and I was I was like a undeveloped human in morons life and it's really tough to get out my life.

✓ Without a computer, my life would be like that of a primitive human; I would feel undeveloped and it would be really hard to get by.

Multiple structural and word-choice errors: missing article before 'computer' and misspelling 'live' for 'life'. 'Like as a historical human' is ungrammatical; use 'like that of a primitive human' or 'like a prehistoric person'. Repetition 'I was I was' and insulting 'morons life' are inappropriate; replace with 'I would feel undeveloped' and 'hard to get by' for clarity. Use conditional 'would be' consistently and correct punctuation to join clauses.

× At the beginning of the time I find it very hard to utilize computer because of I was unable to remember the keyboard shortcuts and also dealing with seat settings.

✓ At the beginning, I found it very hard to use a computer because I was unable to remember the keyboard shortcuts and to adjust the seat settings.

Tense inconsistency: question asks about past difficulty, so use past tense 'found' and 'was unable'. 'Utilize computer' needs article and simpler verb 'use a computer'. 'Because of I was unable' is incorrect; use 'because I was unable'. 'Dealing with seat settings' should be 'to adjust the seat settings' or 'dealing with the seat settings'. Use parallel verb forms and correct past participle not required here; main issue is tense and infinitive forms.