Swimming— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you like swimming?
Candidato
Yes, I enjoy swimming. For example, I go swimming in the sea with my family about twice a year. I think that swimming in the sea is exciting activity because the scenery is very beautiful.
Examinador
Is it difficult to learn how to swim?
Candidato
Yes, in my opinion, learning how to swim is very difficult because swimming requires a lot of skills. For example, it took a lot of time for me to be able to swim well.
Examinador
Where do people in your country like to go swimming?
Candidato
In Japan, most people go swimming in the sea because we can enjoy other activities. For example, people tend to enjoy fishing in the sea and eat fish they caught.
Examinador
What’s the difference between swimming in the pool and swimming in the sea?
Candidato
In my opinion, swimming in the pool is much safer than swimming in the sea, because there are many dangerous animals in the sea. For example, I met a shark in the sea. It was unforgettable experience for me.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Do you like swimming?
Pontuação: 85.0Sugestão: 回答は自然で効果的ですが、「exciting activity」の前に冠詞が抜けているため、文法的に正確にしましょう。また、もう少し具体的な理由や感情を加えるとより良いです。
Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy swimming. For example, I go swimming in the sea with my family about twice a year. I think that swimming in the sea is an exciting activity because the scenery is very beautiful and it makes me feel relaxed.
Is it difficult to learn how to swim?
Pontuação: 80.0Sugestão: 回答は直接的で分かりやすいですが、「a lot of skills」より具体的なスキルの例を挙げると説得力が増します。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより自然です。
Exemplo: Yes, in my opinion, learning how to swim is very difficult because it requires skills like breathing control and proper stroke techniques. For example, it took me several months to master these skills and swim well.
Where do people in your country like to go swimming?
Pontuação: 85.0Sugestão: 回答は内容が具体的で良いですが、「we can enjoy other activities」の部分をもう少し詳しく説明すると良いでしょう。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより自然です。
Exemplo: In Japan, most people go swimming in the sea because they can enjoy other activities like fishing and barbecuing. For example, many people fish in the sea and then eat the fresh fish they caught.
What’s the difference between swimming in the pool and swimming in the sea?
Pontuação: 80.0Sugestão: 回答は興味深いですが、「unforgettable experience」の前に冠詞が必要です。また、もう少し比較の理由を具体的に述べると良いでしょう。
Exemplo: In my opinion, swimming in the pool is much safer than swimming in the sea because pools are controlled environments without dangerous animals. For example, I once met a shark in the sea, which was an unforgettable experience for me.
Gramática
× I think that swimming in the sea is exciting activity because the scenery is very beautiful.
✓ I think that swimming in the sea is an exciting activity because the scenery is very beautiful.
The sentence is missing the article 'an' before the singular countable noun 'exciting activity'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article or determiner. Adding 'an' corrects the sentence.
× For example, people tend to enjoy fishing in the sea and eat fish they caught.
✓ For example, people tend to enjoy fishing in the sea and eat fish they have caught.
The phrase 'fish they caught' lacks the auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense, which is appropriate here to indicate an action completed in the recent past with relevance to the present. Adding 'have' corrects the tense and improves clarity.
× It was unforgettable experience for me.
✓ It was an unforgettable experience for me.
The sentence is missing the article 'an' before the singular countable noun 'unforgettable experience'. Singular countable nouns require an article or determiner. Adding 'an' corrects the sentence.
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