Swimming— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，有重复和小错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更地道的连接词。

Exemplo: Yes, I like swimming because it helps improve my blood circulation and boosts my immune system. Moreover, it is a great way to relieve stress.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，句子结构混乱。建议简化表达，注意语法正确，完整回答问题。

Exemplo: No, I don't find swimming difficult to learn. I think the most important thing is to find a good coach who can give useful advice to improve my swimming skills.

Sugestão: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子不连贯。建议使用更清晰的句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用连接词。

Exemplo: It depends. Some people prefer swimming in swimming pools, while others like swimming in rivers or lakes. Personally, I prefer swimming in the gym because it is more convenient.

Sugestão: 回答内容不够具体且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议具体说明危险因素，使用正确的词汇和句子结构。

Exemplo: In my opinion, swimming in the sea is more dangerous than in a pool because there are risks like strong currents and dangerous sea creatures such as sharks.

× In other hand, swimming is a good way to help me to release the stress.

✓ On the other hand, swimming is a good way to help me release stress.

短语应为“On the other hand”，表示“另一方面”，而不是“In other hand”。此外，“help me to release the stress”中“to”可省略，且“the stress”改为“stress”更自然。

× No, it's not difficult to learn swimming for me in in my opinion the the important things I need to do is find out the greatest code coach that could give me a brilliant suggestion on how to improve swimming skills and how to swimming in the.

✓ No, it's not difficult for me to learn swimming. In my opinion, the important thing I need to do is find the best coach who can give me brilliant suggestions on how to improve my swimming skills and how to swim well.

“learn swimming for me”应为“for me to learn swimming”；“the the”重复，应改正；“greatest code coach”应为“best coach”；“could”改为“can”更合适；“how to swimming”应为“how to swim”；句子结构混乱，需拆分并调整顺序。

× It's depends on some people are found out for swimming in swimming pool and other people could swim in the river and lake.

✓ It depends on some people who swim in swimming pools and others who swim in rivers and lakes.

“It's depends”应为“It depends”；“some people are found out for swimming”表达不当，应改为“some people who swim”；“swimming pool”应为复数“swimming pools”；“river and lake”应为复数“rivers and lakes”。

× As I know different people have a different habit for swimming and I your opinion I prefer swimming in the gym.

✓ As I know, different people have different habits for swimming, and in your opinion, I prefer swimming in the gym.

“I your opinion”应为“in your opinion”；“a different habit”应为“different habits”；句子缺少逗号，影响理解。

× In my opinion, swimming in the sea could be more dangerous than swimming in the swimming pool, because the people who live in the sea could meet a tornado.

✓ In my opinion, swimming in the sea could be more dangerous than swimming in the swimming pool, because people who live near the sea could encounter a tornado.

“the people who live in the sea”不合逻辑，应为“people who live near the sea”；“meet a tornado”应为“encounter a tornado”。

× Say creatures such as the shark and something dangerous animals.

✓ For example, creatures such as sharks and other dangerous animals.

“Say creatures”应为“For example, creatures”；“the shark”应为复数“sharks”；“something dangerous animals”表达错误，应为“other dangerous animals”。