Friends— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors and pronoun confusion (he/she). Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I have a childhood friend named Harpreet Kaur. She is very hardworking and always supports me. Whenever I face problems, she helps me find solutions. We studied together and shared many memorable experiences. I really value our friendship.

Sugestão: Your answer covers the main points but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words like 'also' or 'in addition' to connect ideas smoothly. Be more specific about the games and how discussing problems helps you.

Exemplo: I usually play games like Ludo and carrom with my friends, which is very fun. Also, when I have problems, I discuss them with my friends to find quick solutions. This support helps me concentrate better and improve my studies.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat disorganized and contains incomplete sentences. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect them. Also, avoid repetition and be specific about the cafe and your experiences there.

Exemplo: I often meet my friends at a cafe, which has been my favorite place since childhood. I usually invite them there because the food is delicious. Last year, I even organized my birthday party at the cafe, and my friends complimented the event.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'laser time' and 'It had to make our bond become more stronger.' Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: No, I don't often go out with my friends because I have a busy schedule. Recently, I took my college exams and now I am attending a communication skills institute. However, whenever I have free time, I like to spend it with my friends to strengthen our bond, and sometimes we play games together.

Sugestão: Your answer shows good content but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'Chuck a messages.' Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, organize your ideas with linking words for better flow.

Exemplo: Friends are very important to me because they always support me. For example, last year when I had medical concerns, I sent a message in a group chat and received many helpful suggestions. This made me proud to have such good friends.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'occupying a different ideas' and 'improve my account.' Try to use correct expressions and clearer language. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: I usually prefer spending time with my close friend Harpreet Kaur. However, when I have problems, I discuss them with a group of friends. This way, I get different ideas, which helps me learn more and find solutions quickly.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to organize your thoughts clearly, use correct grammar, and avoid repetition. Keep your answer concise and relevant.

Exemplo: Yes, I often invite my close friend Harpreet Kaur to my home. We enjoy playing games like Ludo and carrom together. We have had a lot of fun and created many good memories.

× Well yes of course I have one of my childhood friend her name is Harpreet Kosh.

✓ Well yes of course I have one of my childhood friends, her name is Harpreet Kosh.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because it refers to one among many childhood friends. When using 'one of my', the noun following should be plural.

× He is very mischievous but she always corporate and sport to me and she is very hardworking and talented.

✓ She is very mischievous but she always cooperates and supports me, and she is very hardworking and talented.

The pronoun 'He' is incorrect because the friend is female ('her name is Harpreet'). Also, 'corporate' is incorrect; the correct verbs are 'cooperates' and 'supports'. The verbs need to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'.

× Whenever I have any type of problem she helped me a lot to find a solution of such a problem and I, Al and we and even we have passed our school together and we did a lot of.

✓ Whenever I have any type of problem, she helps me a lot to find a solution, and we have even passed school together and done a lot.

The verb 'helped' should be present tense 'helps' to match 'Whenever I have' which is present tense. The sentence is also incomplete and unclear; 'passed our school' is better as 'passed school together'. 'Did a lot of' is incomplete and should be 'done a lot'.

× Well, most of the time I prefer to play a game such as Ludo Carbon carrom boards and we did a lot of fun together.

✓ Well, most of the time I prefer to play games such as Ludo, Carrom boards, and we have a lot of fun together.

The phrase 'a game such as Ludo Carbon carrom boards' is confusing and inconsistent in number. 'Game' should be plural 'games' because multiple games are mentioned. Also, 'did a lot of fun' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have a lot of fun'.

× I prefer to meet with them in a cafe.

✓ I prefer to meet them in a cafe.

The verb 'meet' does not require the preposition 'with' when used in this context. 'Meet them' is correct, not 'meet with them'.

× I really like to spend her time with her.

✓ I really like to spend time with her.

The phrase 'spend her time with her' is incorrect. It should be 'spend time with her' because 'her time' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× I vividly remember that last year I have some confusion related to my medical problems when I just Chuck a messages in a group.

✓ I vividly remember that last year I had some confusion related to my medical problems when I just checked messages in a group.

The verb tense 'have' should be past tense 'had' to match 'last year'. Also, 'Chuck a messages' is incorrect; likely intended 'checked messages'. The pronoun and verb usage need correction.

× Yes, of course, as I already mentioning, one of my close friends is a herpet core and I always prefer to play with her sometime we used to sometime we I also invited in my home to play with her with the with the various games like Ludo and carrom boards and I did.

✓ Yes, of course, as I already mentioned, one of my close friends is Harpreet Kaur and I always prefer to play with her. Sometimes we used to play together. I also invited her to my home to play various games like Ludo and Carrom boards, and we had a lot of fun.

The phrase 'as I already mentioning' should be 'as I already mentioned' (past tense). The name 'herpet core' is corrected to 'Harpreet Kaur'. The sentence structure is fragmented and unclear; it is corrected for clarity and grammar. 'I also invited in my home' should be 'I invited her to my home'. 'Did' is incomplete and replaced with 'had a lot of fun'.