Friends— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is heartfelt but could be clearer and more natural. Avoid repeating phrases and focus on correct grammar, such as 'since she was born.' Also, try to limit your answer to 4-5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I have a friend named Ozge whom I've known since she was born. We've been best friends for 17 years, and I trust her completely. Our friendship is very important to me because she has always been there for me. Without her, I don't know what I would do.

Sugestão: Your answer includes good ideas but is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to organize your thoughts with a clear topic sentence and use linking words like 'also' or 'besides' to connect ideas. Avoid repeating phrases and check grammar, such as 'I like to drive a car and listen to music.'

Exemplo: I usually enjoy driving with my friends while listening to music. Besides that, we often go to coffee shops or shopping malls to chat. I really value the quality time we spend together, whether we're out or just staying at home.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases like 'bill can't exam.' Try to be more precise and use linking words such as 'because' and 'besides' to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Exemplo: Currently, we often meet in the library or quiet coffee shops because we need to study for exams. Besides that, I usually go to a nearby shopping mall called Panora, which I really like.

Sugestão: Your answer shows your feelings well but has some grammar and clarity issues. Try to use correct expressions like 'being at home' and avoid repeating words. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons clearly.

Exemplo: I usually go out every day because I don't like being at home alone; it makes me feel nervous and anxious. I enjoy spending time with my friends because it helps me relax and improves my mood.

Sugestão: Your answer expresses strong feelings but is confusing and has grammar errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use correct sentence structures, and avoid double negatives. Use linking words like 'because' to explain your feelings.

Exemplo: Friends are very important to me, second only to my family. Without their support and friendship, I would feel very lonely and depressed. I always feel anxious when my friends are not around.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but has some grammar mistakes and awkward phrases. Use correct expressions like 'a close friend' and 'various types of topics.' Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'and' to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I prefer spending time with a group of friends because with just one friend, the topics can be limited. In a group, we can discuss many different subjects, and everyone has a unique sense of humor, which makes it more enjoyable.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but has grammar and clarity issues. Use correct phrases like 'come to our home' and avoid repeating negatives. Also, try to combine sentences for better flow using linking words like 'so' and 'because.'

Exemplo: I usually don't invite friends to my home because my mom is very particular about cleanliness and doesn't like guests over. So, we usually meet outside or at their homes. Also, my mom prefers that I don't visit other people's houses.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more concise. Use correct tenses and linking words like 'however' and 'now' to contrast past and present. Avoid awkward phrases like 'in the placement.'

Exemplo: Actually, the places where I meet my friends haven't changed much. However, the activities have changed. When I was a child, we often went to the cinema or McDonald's, but now I prefer meeting at coffee shops, driving together, or visiting each other's homes.

Sugestão: Your answer has good points but needs clearer grammar and sentence structure. Use correct phrases like 'it's hard to hear each other' and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to explain your ideas logically.

Exemplo: Some places are more suitable for meeting because they are less crowded. When a place is very crowded, it's hard to hear and talk clearly. Therefore, I prefer more open spaces, as crowded places make me feel anxious.

× We have been best friends for 17 years since she born.

✓ We have been best friends for 17 years since she was born.

The phrase 'since she born' is incorrect because 'born' is a past participle and requires an auxiliary verb to form the past tense. The correct form is 'since she was born' to indicate the starting point in the past.

× I know her since the day she born and she the friendship of Ozge is the most important, most crucial thing in my life.

✓ I have known her since the day she was born and the friendship with Ozge is the most important, most crucial thing in my life.

The present tense 'I know' is incorrect when referring to a time starting in the past and continuing to the present; the present perfect 'I have known' is appropriate. Also, 'she the friendship of Ozge' is ungrammatical; it should be 'the friendship with Ozge' to correctly express the relationship.

× If I don't have her in my life, I don't know what can I do.

✓ If I don't have her in my life, I don't know what I can do.

In indirect questions, the word order should be subject + modal verb, not modal verb + subject. Therefore, 'what can I do' should be 'what I can do'.

× Since they are got my driver lessons, I like to drive in car and listen to some listen to some music, but other than that I like to go to a coffee shop or a shopping mall for chatting or I just basically love being with my friends.

✓ Since they have given me driving lessons, I like to drive in the car and listen to some music, but other than that I like to go to a coffee shop or a shopping mall to chat, or I just basically love being with my friends.

The phrase 'they are got my driver lessons' is incorrect; the present perfect 'they have given me driving lessons' is correct. Also, 'listen to some listen to some music' is repetitive and should be simplified. 'For chatting' should be 'to chat' to express purpose.

× I like to drive in car and listen to some listen to some music

✓ I like to drive in the car and listen to some music

The phrase 'drive in car' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'car'. Also, the repetition 'listen to some listen to some music' is an error and should be corrected to 'listen to some music'.

× If I we're staying at home, I'm fine with that and I like I like the quality of time we spend together.

✓ If I were staying at home, I'm fine with that and I like the quality of time we spend together.

The phrase 'If I we're staying' incorrectly uses 'we're' (we are) instead of the subjunctive 'were' for hypothetical situations. Also, the repetition 'I like I like' should be corrected to a single 'I like'.

× Right now I have I have a few exams so we're usually meeting in library or some working coffee shops because we need to study for the bill can't exam.

✓ Right now I have a few exams so we're usually meeting in the library or some working coffee shops because we need to study for the B1 exam.

The phrase 'in library' requires the definite article 'the' to specify the place. Also, 'bill can't exam' is a mishearing or typo; it should be 'B1 exam' (a common English proficiency exam).

× I usually go to a shopping mall called Panora because it's very near, it's nearby to my home and I love that place.

✓ I usually go to a shopping mall called Panora because it's very near, it's near my home and I love that place.

The phrase 'nearby to my home' is incorrect; 'nearby' is an adverb and does not require 'to'. The correct phrase is 'near my home'.

× I usually go out every day because I don't like being in home and alone.

✓ I usually go out every day because I don't like being at home and alone.

The phrase 'being in home' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at' when referring to being at one's home.

× I like the value of their their time.

✓ I value their time.

The phrase 'I like the value of their their time' is awkward and contains a repeated word 'their'. The correct expression is 'I value their time' to express appreciation.

× I love everything that I do with my friends because it's just relax my mindset and I became more relaxed and more kind.

✓ I love everything that I do with my friends because it just relaxes my mind and I become more relaxed and kinder.

The verb 'relax' needs to be in third person singular present tense 'relaxes' to agree with 'it'. 'Mindset' is better replaced with 'mind' in this context. 'Became' should be present tense 'become' to match the present context. 'More kind' should be 'kinder' as the comparative form of 'kind'.

× After my family, there are the minor things in my life because I don't know what can I do with that.

✓ After my family, there are minor things in my life because I don't know what I can do with that.

The phrase 'there are the minor things' is incorrect because 'minor things' is plural and indefinite; the definite article 'the' should be omitted. Also, 'what can I do' should be 'what I can do' in indirect speech.

× There's without without their support or without their quality friendship.

✓ It's without their support or without their quality friendship.

The phrase 'There's without without' is incorrect; 'there's' (there is) is not used with abstract concepts like 'without their support'. 'It's' (it is) is more appropriate here.

× I always felt very anxious when I don't have my friends around with me.

✓ I always feel very anxious when I don't have my friends around me.

The phrase 'I always felt' is past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual present feeling, so 'I always feel' is correct. Also, 'around with me' is redundant; 'around me' suffices.

× I like to spend my time with a group of friends because when you're with A1 friend, you can only talk about certain things when but when you're in a group, you can talk with very exceptional and like very various type of topics.

✓ I like to spend my time with a group of friends because when you're with one friend, you can only talk about certain things, but when you're in a group, you can talk about very diverse and various types of topics.

The phrase 'A1 friend' is incorrect; it should be 'one friend'. The phrase 'talk with very exceptional and like very various type of topics' is awkward; 'talk about very diverse and various types of topics' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Everyone have a different humor and different things to talk about, so it's just more enjoyable.

✓ Everyone has a different sense of humor and different things to talk about, so it's just more enjoyable.

The subject 'Everyone' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has'. Also, 'a different humor' is better expressed as 'a different sense of humor'.

× She doesn't like when someone's come to home because she thinks it's nasty.

✓ She doesn't like when someone comes to the home because she thinks it's nasty.

The phrase 'someone's come' is incorrect; it should be 'someone comes' for present tense. Also, 'to home' requires the definite article 'the' to be 'to the home'.

× So we usually meet outside or in their home.

✓ So we usually meet outside or at their home.

The phrase 'in their home' is less common; 'at their home' is the correct preposition to indicate location.

× But my mom doesn't like me to go other homes either.

✓ But my mom doesn't like me to go to other homes either.

The phrase 'go other homes' is missing the preposition 'to' which is necessary after 'go' when indicating destination.

× Actually in the placement there is no difference.

✓ Actually, in the placement, there is no difference.

This sentence is grammatically correct but adding commas improves clarity. No tense error detected.

× But there is a difference that the things that I do with my friends right now, because when I was a child I always go to cinema or McDonald's for eating something.

✓ But there is a difference in the things that I do with my friends right now, because when I was a child I always went to the cinema or McDonald's to eat something.

The phrase 'I always go' refers to past habitual action and should be in past tense 'I always went'. Also, 'to cinema' requires the definite article 'the cinema'. 'For eating something' is better expressed as 'to eat something'.

× But right now I don't prefer to go cinema or McDonald's.

✓ But right now I don't prefer to go to the cinema or McDonald's.

The phrase 'go cinema' is missing the preposition 'to' and the definite article 'the' before 'cinema'.

× I prefer to go out regular coffee shop or like I said, driving a car or meeting in their home.

✓ I prefer to go to a regular coffee shop or, like I said, drive a car or meet at their home.

The phrase 'go out regular coffee shop' is missing 'to a'. Also, 'driving a car' and 'meeting in their home' should be parallel infinitive forms 'drive a car' and 'meet at their home'.

× Because some places are more crowded than the other ones.

✓ Because some places are more crowded than others.

The phrase 'than the other ones' is wordy; 'than others' is more concise and correct.

× And when a place is very crowded, you can very not clearly hearing each other or you can not clearly speak to each other.

✓ And when a place is very crowded, you cannot hear each other clearly or speak to each other clearly.

The phrase 'you can very not clearly hearing' is incorrect in word order and verb form. The correct form is 'you cannot hear each other clearly'. Similarly, 'you can not clearly speak' should be 'speak clearly'.

× So I think more, more free spaces are the better one.

✓ So I think more free space is better.

The phrase 'more, more free spaces are the better one' is ungrammatical and redundant. The correct expression is 'more free space is better'.

× the Occupy spaces are. It's very making me anxious.

✓ The occupied spaces make me very anxious.

The phrase 'the Occupy spaces are' is incorrect; it should be 'the occupied spaces'. 'It's very making me anxious' is ungrammatical; the correct form is 'make me very anxious'.