Friends— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but needs better sentence structure and grammar. Try to use clear sentences and avoid run-ons. Use linking words like 'because' or 'since' to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I have a friend whom I have known since childhood because we met in our neighborhood. We went to the same school, and sometimes we meet to talk about our childhood and share jokes.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and incomplete sentences. Use correct verb tenses and complete your thoughts. Also, use linking words like 'and' or 'also' to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I usually do outdoor activities with my friends. For example, we go hiking to explore new places. Sometimes, we play basketball at the park near my house, and we also visit cafes to chat.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use proper prepositions. Avoid filler words like 'umm'.

Exemplo: We often meet by phone through video calls. Sometimes, we meet to watch movies at the cinema or gather at a cafe because it is comfortable.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammar errors and unclear phrases. Use correct prepositions and clearer expressions. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I often go out with my friends to watch movies. At cafes, we share stories, crack jokes, and relax together.

Sugestão: Your answer conveys meaning but has grammar mistakes. Use correct sentence structures and clearer vocabulary. Try to explain why friends are important with examples.

Exemplo: My friends are very important to me because I can share all my problems with them. They often help me find solutions when I face difficulties.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and has grammar errors. Try to express your preference clearly and explain reasons logically using linking words.

Exemplo: I prefer to spend time with one friend because it is easier to share my problems, and that friend can give me full attention.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but some sentences are unclear and have grammar mistakes. Use correct prepositions and clearer descriptions. Avoid listing too many items without explanation.

Exemplo: Yes, I often invite my friends to my home on weekends. I prepare delicious food, and we watch movies or play games together.

Sugestão: Your answer has filler words and unclear phrases. Try to speak clearly and organize your ideas logically using linking words like 'in the past' and 'nowadays'.

Exemplo: Yes, there is a big difference. In the past, we met at school, but nowadays we meet at cafes or keep in touch through video calls on our phones.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and has many filler words. Try to explain your ideas clearly and use correct vocabulary. Avoid repetition and organize your answer logically.

Exemplo: Some places like cafes and parks are suitable for meeting friends because they are comfortable and quiet. However, busy or noisy places are not good because it is hard to talk clearly.

× Yes, of course I have a friend since the childhood we met in our neighborhood.

✓ Yes, of course I have had a friend since childhood whom I met in our neighborhood.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'have' instead of 'have had' to indicate possession from the past until now. Also, 'the childhood' is incorrect; 'childhood' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. The relative clause 'we met in our neighborhood' should be 'whom I met in our neighborhood' for clarity.

× Since then we are friends, we went to same school, sometimes we meet each other, we talk about our childhood days and crack jokes about them.

✓ Since then we have been friends, we went to the same school, sometimes we meet each other, we talk about our childhood days and crack jokes about them.

The phrase 'Since then we are friends' should be in present perfect continuous tense 'have been friends' to indicate an action continuing from the past to present. Also, 'same school' needs the definite article 'the'.

× Since then we are friends, we went to same school, sometimes we meet each other, we talk about our childhood days and crack jokes about them.

✓ Since then we are friends, we went to the same school, sometimes we meet each other, we talk about our childhood days and crack jokes about them.

The phrase 'we went to same school' misses the definite article 'the' before 'same school'.

× We we went to somewhere for hiking to explore the places.

✓ We went somewhere for hiking to explore the places.

The sentence has a repeated word 'we'. Also, 'went to somewhere' is incorrect; 'went somewhere' is correct as 'somewhere' already implies a place.

× Sometimes we play basketball on the park which is near to the my house and sometimes we went to Cafe for some talks and.

✓ Sometimes we play basketball in the park which is near my house and sometimes we went to a cafe for some talks.

The correct preposition for playing basketball is 'in' the park, not 'on'. Also, 'near to the my house' is incorrect; it should be 'near my house'. 'Cafe' should be preceded by an article 'a'. The sentence was incomplete, so 'and' was removed.

× We often meet with each other at phone, we call each other in video call, or sometimes we meet umm to see movies in cinema hall or we meet each other to cafe because cafe are really.

✓ We often meet each other on the phone, we call each other via video call, or sometimes we meet to see movies in the cinema hall or we meet each other at a cafe because cafes are really nice.

The preposition 'at phone' is incorrect; it should be 'on the phone'. 'Call each other in video call' should be 'via video call'. 'Meet to see movies' is acceptable but 'in cinema hall' needs 'the' before 'cinema hall'. 'Meet each other to cafe' should be 'at a cafe'. 'Cafe are' should be 'cafes are'.

× Yes, I often go out with my friends to watch movies and in Cafe we share lots of things to each other, we crack jokes, we enjoy lots of movement to each other and just relax for us.

✓ Yes, I often go out with my friends to watch movies and in cafes we share lots of things with each other, we crack jokes, we enjoy lots of moments with each other and just relax.

'In Cafe' should be 'in cafes' or 'at a cafe'. 'Share lots of things to each other' is incorrect; it should be 'with each other'. 'Enjoy lots of movement to each other' is incorrect; likely intended 'enjoy lots of moments with each other'. 'Relax for us' is awkward; 'just relax' suffices.

× I can tell every my problematic topic with them.

✓ I can tell them about every problematic topic of mine.

'Every my problematic topic' is incorrect word order and possessive usage. It should be 'every problematic topic of mine'. Also, 'tell every my problematic topic with them' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'tell them about'.

× They help to give some solution to move out from that type of problem.

✓ They help by giving some solutions to move out of that type of problem.

'Help to give' is awkward; 'help by giving' is better. 'Some solution' should be plural 'some solutions' or 'a solution'. 'Move out from' should be 'move out of'.

× I prefer to spend my time with one friends 'cause I can't more or depend with only one friend because I can't share my problem with one and he or she can only give her attention to me.

✓ I prefer to spend my time with one friend because I can't depend on more than one friend; I can't share my problem with many, and he or she can only give their attention to me.

'One friends' is incorrect; 'friends' is plural, so it should be 'one friend'. 'Can't more or depend with only one friend' is unclear; corrected to 'can't depend on more than one friend'. Pronoun agreement corrected to 'their' for gender neutrality.

× During the weekend days I invite my friends in my home and I prepare some delicious foods for them and we watch television, some entertainment, movies and we play some games like cars, Karen, boats, etcetera.

✓ During the weekend days I invite my friends to my home and I prepare some delicious food for them and we watch television, some entertainment, movies and we play some games like cars, cards, boats, etcetera.

The preposition 'in my home' should be 'to my home'. 'Delicious foods' is better as 'delicious food' (uncountable). 'Karen' is likely a typo for 'cards'.

× Yes, dear, really there are lots of differences uh can be seems to recognize in the past we made each other at school.

✓ Yes, dear, there are really lots of differences that can be recognized; in the past, we met each other at school.

The sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'Can be seems to recognize' is incorrect; corrected to 'that can be recognized'. 'We made each other' is incorrect; 'we met each other' is correct.

× Nowadays we meet each other at cafes, we keep in touch in mobile phones like video call, etcetera.

✓ Nowadays we meet each other at cafes, and we keep in touch on mobile phones through video calls, etcetera.

'Keep in touch in mobile phones' is incorrect; it should be 'keep in touch on mobile phones'. 'Like video call' should be 'through video calls'.

× Some best places like Cafe and some park areas are really suitable for uh, meeting with friends.

✓ Some of the best places like cafes and some park areas are really suitable for meeting with friends.

'Some best places' should be 'some of the best places'. 'Cafe' should be plural 'cafes'.

× Umm board and other places like open areas are not suitable because they are really noisy for each other, uh, for each other, friends, no one can talk clearly on top.

✓ Um, board games and other places like open areas are not suitable because they are really noisy for friends; no one can talk clearly there.

'Board' alone is unclear; likely 'board games'. 'Noisy for each other, uh, for each other, friends' is repetitive and unclear; simplified to 'noisy for friends'. 'On top' is incorrect; 'there' is appropriate.