Friends— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence stating whether you have a long-term friend, then give one or two specific details (how long, where you met, current relationship). Avoid filler words and repetitions. Use simple past and present perfect correctly (e.g., 'I have a friend I've known since high school').

Exemplo: Yes. I have a friend I've known since high school. We studied at the same school for three years, and although we now live in different cities, we still keep in touch by chatting every week.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence about common activities, then add one or two specific examples with linking words (for example, 'we usually... because...'). Avoid vague phrases and practice collocations (hang out, chat, practise English).

Exemplo: We usually hang out and talk about our lives. For example, we often go to a café to practise English and discuss work or study plans.

Sugestão: Start with a direct answer naming the place and time, then give a brief reason. Use correct time expressions ('on weekends', 'during weekdays'). Avoid repetition.

Exemplo: We often meet on weekends, usually at a café or at one of our homes, because we are busy studying from Monday to Friday.

Sugestão: Answer directly (Yes/No), give a clear reason, and one example. Use concise language and correct verb forms ('we are busy', 'we often go to our hometown').

Exemplo: Not really. We are usually busy with studies during the week, and on weekends many of us visit our hometowns, so it's hard to find time to go out together.

Sugestão: Provide a clear opinion sentence, then give specific reasons with linking words ('because', 'for example'). Focus on one or two concrete qualities and an example of support they give you.

Exemplo: Friends are very important to me because they motivate and support me. For example, my best friend encourages me when I feel stressed and helps me prepare for exams.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly, then give a concise reason and one example. Avoid confusing comparisons and unclear references (like 'girlfriend'). Use 'prefer to spend time with one friend' and explain why (deeper conversation, less noise).

Exemplo: I prefer spending time with one close friend because it's easier to have deep conversations. For example, when I meet my best friend, we can talk about personal problems without interruptions.

Sugestão: Answer clearly (Yes/No/Not often), give specific reasons, and propose an alternative. Use correct adjectives and phrases ('my house is far', 'not very clean', 'we prefer to meet outside').

Exemplo: Not often. My house is far from most of my friends and it's not very tidy, so we usually meet at a café instead.

Sugestão: Give a clear comparison: state one difference, then explain why using linking words ('now', 'before', 'because'). Be specific about places and schedules.

Exemplo: Yes. Before, we met at school or in the neighbourhood because we had more free time. Now we usually meet less often and choose cafés on weekends because everyone is busy during the week.

Sugestão: Answer with a general reason, then give specific criteria that make a place suitable (quiet, convenient, affordable). Use linking words and one concrete example.

Exemplo: Some places are suitable because they are comfortable, quiet and easy to get to. For example, a nearby coffee shop is ideal for chatting because it's relaxed and not crowded.

× I have a friends when I was young and lied to the, uh, high school, I had some friend I study in the the same high school for right now we have to uh, uh, to uh, let.

✓ I had a friend when I was young and went to the same high school; we are still in touch now.

The speaker mixes singular and plural forms and uses incorrect verbs. 'a friends' should be 'a friend' (singular). 'lied to the high school' is incorrect—likely intended 'went to the same high school.' Use past tense 'had' and 'went' for past situations and a present clause 'we are still in touch' for current status. Suggestion: ensure noun number matches articles and choose correct verbs for actions (had/went, not 'lied').

× I usually do with my friend, I try to, uh, talk each other about, uh, in our life that to something, uh, because when I meet each other, I try to, uh, speak in English and to hang out, try to speak other people from everywhere.

✓ With my friends I usually try to talk to each other about our lives; when we meet I try to speak English and hang out with people from different places.

Problems include incorrect verb forms and prepositions. Use 'talk to each other' not 'talk each other'. 'About our lives' is the correct prepositional phrase. Remove extra 'to' before 'hang out' and use 'hang out with people' not 'speak other people'. Suggestion: use correct verb+preposition patterns (talk to, hang out with) and simplify phrases for clarity.

× I usually, we often meet each other in the weekends because we, uh, our shell, we have free time at the weekends because, uh, uh, on Monday or until Friday, we have to study and.

✓ We usually meet each other on weekends because we have free time then; from Monday to Friday we have to study.

Use 'on weekends' (not 'in the weekends'). 'On Monday or until Friday' is incorrect; use 'from Monday to Friday'. Remove extraneous fragments. Suggestion: learn standard time prepositions: 'on weekends', 'in the morning', 'from X to Y'.

× Not really, uh, because I don't have go to hang out with my friend because we are busy at the same time, uh, or on the weekend we uh, go to hometown, uh, by our shell because we don't have each other to go hang out anymore.

✓ Not really, because I don't go hang out with my friends; we are busy. On weekends we go to our hometowns, so we cannot hang out together anymore.

Multiple preposition and verb errors: 'have go' should be 'go' or 'have time to go'. 'Go to hometown' should be 'go to our hometowns'. 'By our shell' unclear—interpreted as 'go to our hometowns' and rephrased. Suggestion: use 'go to' + place, and ensure subject agreement and pluralization for 'friends' and 'hometowns'.

× My friend asked is important for me because he is always motivate me and he's friendly and kind to do something with me because we have to memory and uh let us people like him and me.

✓ My friend is important to me because he always motivates me; he's friendly and kind and we share many memories, so people like him and me.

Pronoun and verb forms incorrect: 'asked is' should be 'is', 'important to me' not 'for me'. Use 'motivates' (third-person singular). 'We have to memory' should be 'we have memories' or 'we share many memories'. Suggestion: check subject-verb agreement and use correct collocations: 'important to someone', 'motivate' -> 'motivates'.

× Uh for me, I think I prefers to spend time with one friend because one friend is easy to communication each other.

✓ For me, I prefer to spend time with one friend because it is easier to communicate with one person.

'I prefers' is incorrect; subject 'I' requires 'prefer'. 'Easy to communication' should be 'easier to communicate'. Also restructure sentence for clarity and correct comparative form. Suggestion: ensure verbs match subjects and use 'to communicate' rather than noun 'communication' after 'easy'.

× Because uh, one friend is the best friend for the uh, girlfriend. We don't have talk each other. Uh, for girlfriend, for one friend, we try to tell each other about something.

✓ Because one friend can be a best friend or a girlfriend; we can talk to each other and tell each other things.

Confusing pronoun and noun references: 'for the girlfriend' is unclear. 'We don't have talk each other' should be 'we can talk to each other'. Use 'tell each other things' instead of 'about something'. Suggestion: clarify intended relationships and use 'talk to' and 'tell each other'.

× Normally I rally to invite friend go to my home because my home is not clean and my home is a long way from from him so we can call each other.

✓ I rarely invite friends to my home because my house is not clean and it is far from where they live, so we usually call each other instead.

Preposition and adverb errors: 'rally' should be 'rarely'. Use 'invite friends to my home' (add 'to'). 'A long way from from him' should be 'far from where they live'. Suggestion: use 'rarely' and proper 'invite X to Y' structure and correct redundancy 'from from'.

× Uh, swami, uh, two thing, uh, Tooting is not the shame because with when I was young, we have time, uh, each other for right now we don't have much time to meet each others because we are busy, uh, at the uh, we are busy ourselves.

✓ There are two things: when I was young we had more time to see each other; now we don't have much time because we are busy with our own lives.

Sentence mixture and tense issues. 'Tooting is not the shame' unclear—interpreted as 'not the same'. Use past tense 'had' for past habitual actions and present 'don't have' for current. 'Each others' should be 'each other'. Suggestion: break into two clear clauses, use correct tenses, and fix pronoun forms.

× Uh, for me, I just tried to meeting with my friend, like to, and at the break and like to drink coffee at the breaks or to the coffee shop.

✓ I usually meet my friends during breaks and we like to drink coffee at the coffee shop.

Incorrect verb form 'tried to meeting' should be 'try to meet' or simple 'meet'. 'At the break' -> 'during breaks'. Use consistent tense and correct verb forms. Suggestion: use 'meet' and 'during' for time expressions and 'drink coffee at the coffee shop'.