Watch— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "which is which was" and try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, use correct prepositions such as "bought it for me" instead of "to me".

Exemplo: Yes, I wear an Apple Watch that my favorite cousin gifted me when she returned from America. It is very special because it was the first watch I ever owned.

Sugestão: Try to avoid repeating the same information and improve grammar, for example, use "watches are" instead of "watch are". Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and add more specific reasons or examples.

Exemplo: Yes, my cousin gifted me a watch when she came back from America. I consider it very precious because, as my mother says, watches help us stay connected with loved ones by reminding us of them.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and better linking words. For example, use "to show off their wealth" instead of "show them off to the world about how rich they are". Also, explain your preference with reasons.

Exemplo: I think some people wear expensive watches to show off their wealth or because they received them as meaningful gifts. Personally, I prefer simple and comfortable watches because they suit my daily lifestyle.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and correct grammar. Avoid confusing phrases like "whenever that was sticking". Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific reasons.

Exemplo: Yes, I think wearing a watch is important because it helps us keep track of time. As the saying goes, 'time and tide wait for no one,' so a watch reminds us to use our time wisely and move forward in life.

× Yes, I do wear a watch.

✓ Yes, I do wear a watch.

No correction needed here as the sentence is grammatically correct.

× It's Apple Watch which is which was gifted to me by my favorite cousin.

✓ It's an Apple Watch which was gifted to me by my favorite cousin.

The definite article 'the' is missing before 'Apple Watch'. Since it is the first mention and a specific type of watch, 'an' is appropriate here because 'Apple' starts with a vowel sound.

× She bought it to me when she returned from America.

✓ She bought it for me when she returned from America.

The correct preposition to indicate the recipient of a gift is 'for', not 'to'. 'Bought it for me' is the correct phrase.

× It is really special to me and it was the first ever watch that I ever wore in my life.

✓ It is really special to me and it was the first watch that I ever wore in my life.

The phrase 'first ever watch' is redundant; 'first watch' suffices. Also, 'ever' is unnecessary here and can be omitted for clarity.

× Have you ever got a watch as a gift?

✓ Have you ever gotten a watch as a gift?

In American English, the past participle of 'get' is 'gotten' when used with 'have'. 'Got' is the simple past tense. Since this is present perfect tense, 'gotten' is correct.

× It was the most precious gift someone has ever given to me because my mother says that watch are the best things that one can give to you because it helps you stay connected to them.

✓ It was the most precious gift someone has ever given to me because my mother says that watches are the best things that one can give to you because they help you stay connected to them.

The noun 'watch' should be plural 'watches' to agree with the plural verb 'are'. Also, pronouns should agree in number: 'they help' instead of 'it helps'.

× I believe that some people wear expensive watches mostly to show them off to the world about how rich they are maybe, or they just got it as a gift from someone who loved them very dearly.

✓ I believe that some people wear expensive watches mostly to show off to the world how rich they are, or they just got them as gifts from someone who loves them very dearly.

The phrase 'show them off' is incorrect; it should be 'show off' without 'them'. Also, 'got it' should be 'got them' to agree with plural 'watches'. 'Loved' should be 'loves' to agree with singular 'someone'.

× I personally prefer watches that are simple and cozy.

✓ I personally prefer watches that are simple and comfortable.

The adjective 'cozy' is typically used for places or environments, not for watches. 'Comfortable' is more appropriate to describe watches.

× Obviously, it is important to wear a watch because it helps us keep track of time and it reminds us that time is everything.

✓ Obviously, it is important to wear a watch because it helps us keep track of time and reminds us that time is everything.

The second 'it' is unnecessary and can be omitted for smoother sentence flow.

× Time and tide waits for no one, and whenever that clock is, whenever that was sticking, we shall move forward in our life, such as the clock.

✓ Time and tide wait for no one, and whenever that clock is, whenever it is ticking, we shall move forward in our life, just like the clock.

The phrase 'Time and tide waits' has a subject-verb agreement error; 'wait' is correct because the subject is plural. 'Was sticking' is incorrect; 'is ticking' fits better. 'Such as the clock' is awkward; 'just like the clock' is clearer.