Websites— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng sử dụng các từ liên kết để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: I often visit Facebook because I follow pages that provide information about the economy and politics. In addition, I use it to chat and video call with my parents.

Sugestão: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và rõ ràng để truyền đạt ý tưởng. Sử dụng các liên từ như 'because' và 'in addition' một cách hợp lý để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: My favorite website is Facebook because it helps me get useful information about the economy easily. In addition, I can chat and video call with my friends.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên tập trung vào việc sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai. Hãy sử dụng các từ liên kết để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, the websites I visit have changed over time. They have become more user-friendly and offer better security features.

Sugestão: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi và sử dụng các từ liên kết để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Cố gắng cung cấp các chi tiết cụ thể và liên quan hơn.

Exemplo: I think Facebook is popular in my country because people can post videos and images. In addition, they can chat with friends and family, and get useful information.

× I usually visit our Facebook because I usually Buffalo some page to assess information in the work like economy or political.

✓ I usually visit Facebook because I usually follow some pages to access information about work, like economy or politics.

The prepositions 'in the work like economy or political' are incorrect. The correct prepositions are 'about work, like economy or politics' to indicate the topics of information. Also, 'Buffalo' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'follow', and 'assess' should be 'access'.

× In addition, I also use able to chat with my rent san confido with my parents.

✓ In addition, I am also able to chat with my friends and video call my parents.

The phrase 'use able to' is incorrect; it should be 'am able to'. 'Rent san confido' seems to be a mispronunciation or typo for 'friends and video'. The pronouns and nouns need correction for clarity and grammar.

× My favorite my favorite website is Facebook because I can follow some page with help me provide useful information easily about economy.

✓ My favorite website is Facebook because I can follow some pages that help me get useful information easily about the economy.

The phrase 'with help me provide' is incorrect; it should be 'that help me get'. Also, 'some page' should be plural 'some pages' to match the context. 'About economy' should be 'about the economy' for specificity.

× Tan bullet is in addition I use able to chat with my friends and con video with my barrel.

✓ In addition, I am able to chat with my friends and video call my parents.

'Tan bullet' is unclear and likely a mishearing; it should be omitted. 'Use able to' is incorrect; it should be 'am able to'. 'Con video with my barrel' should be 'video call my parents'. Pronouns and verbs need correction for clarity.

× Oh yes, the website I visit I have allowed trends overtime.

✓ Oh yes, the websites I visit have changed over time.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'I have allowed trends overtime' is incorrect. The intended meaning is that the websites visited have changed over time, so the sentence is restructured accordingly.

× How many of them have of debt?

✓ Many of them have changed.

'Have of debt' is incorrect and nonsensical in this context. Likely, the speaker meant 'have changed'. The quantifier 'how many' is also inappropriate here; 'many' fits better.

× They are out to be more userfriendly Ann.

✓ They have become more user-friendly and

'Out to be' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have become'. 'Userfriendly' should be hyphenated as 'user-friendly'. 'Ann' is likely a mishearing of 'and'.

× Rotat you show up by a more security.

✓ They show up with more security.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Rotat you show up by a more security' does not make sense. The intended meaning is that the websites have improved security, so the sentence is corrected accordingly.

× I think Facebook is the popular in my country are because they can pose video are.

✓ I think Facebook is popular in my country because people can post videos.

'The popular' should be 'popular' without 'the'. 'Are' is incorrect here. 'Pose video are' is a mishearing of 'post videos'. The sentence is corrected for singular/plural and clarity.

× Image in Facebook Ansell memory here.

✓ Images on Facebook are very memorable here.

'Ansell memory here' is unclear; likely meant 'are very memorable here'. 'Image' should be plural 'Images'. Preposition 'in' should be 'on' for websites.

× In addition, they can a chat with friends or parents and an Israeli rovide useful information for them.

✓ In addition, they can chat with friends or parents and also provide useful information for them.

'Can a chat' is incorrect; it should be 'can chat'. 'An Israeli rovide' is a mishearing of 'also provide'. Prepositions and articles are corrected for clarity.