Websites— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'on line' nên là 'online', 'gain not learn new knowledge' không rõ nghĩa, và 'Verity of course is an interactive lessons' không đúng ngữ pháp. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng, từ vựng chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Exemplo: I often visit online learning websites like Duolingo because they help me improve my language skills and learn new things. These platforms are very useful since they offer a variety of interactive courses.

Sugestão: Bạn trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi chính tả như 'Dual Lingo' thay vì 'Duolingo' và 'anwer my step by step' không đúng ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi chính tả và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

Exemplo: My favorite website is Duolingo, an online platform for learning English. I like it because it offers interactive courses that are easy to follow and help me improve my vocabulary step by step.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác như '5th visit', 'How do find nightly?', 'update their light hours', 'mobile responsible', và câu cuối không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, the websites I often visit have changed over time. Many of them have updated their layouts to be more user-friendly and mobile-responsive, which makes browsing much easier. Additionally, some sites now offer personalized content.

Sugestão: Bạn có một số lỗi chính tả và ngữ pháp như 'Tick Tock' thay vì 'TikTok', 'user to a block short videos' không đúng, 'knew website education platform' sai chính tả và ngữ pháp. Bạn nên chú ý phát âm tên riêng, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Exemplo: In Vietnam, TikTok is extremely popular because it allows users to watch short videos that are entertaining and easy to enjoy. People spend time on this platform to relax and have fun. Besides TikTok, many people also visit educational websites to stay informed and learn new things.

× As a student I often visit on line learning websites like Duolingo in Khosara because they help me improve my language skills and gain not learn new knowledge.

✓ As a student, I often visit online learning websites like Duolingo in Khosara because they help me improve my language skills and gain new knowledge.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used before 'line'; the correct form is 'online'. Also, the phrase 'gain not learn new knowledge' is incorrect; 'gain new knowledge' is the proper expression. Additionally, a comma is needed after 'As a student' for clarity.

× I find these platforms very. Useful since they offer a Verity of course is an interactive lessons.

✓ I find these platforms very useful since they offer a variety of courses and interactive lessons.

The period after 'very' is incorrect and breaks the sentence. 'Verity' is a misspelling of 'variety'. 'Course is an interactive lessons' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'courses and interactive lessons' to match plural forms and correct conjunction usage.

× My favorite website is Duolingo, an online platform for learning English. I love Dual Lingo because it offers interactive courses that are easy to follow and it helps me improve my vocabulary anwer my step by step.

✓ My favorite website is Duolingo, an online platform for learning English. I love Duolingo because it offers interactive courses that are easy to follow and helps me improve my vocabulary step by step.

The name 'Dual Lingo' is misspelled; it should be 'Duolingo'. The phrase 'anwer my step by step' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'helps me improve my vocabulary step by step'. Also, 'it helps' is better without the second 'it' for smoother sentence flow.

× Yes, the websites I frequently 5th visit. How do find nightly? Change it over time, many of them have update their light hours to be more user friendly and more mobile responsible, which might browsing much easier.

✓ Yes, the websites I frequently visit have changed over time. Many of them have updated their layouts to be more user-friendly and more mobile responsive, which makes browsing much easier.

The phrase '5th visit. How do find nightly? Change it over time' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it should be 'frequently visit have changed over time'. 'Have update' should be 'have updated'. 'Light hours' is likely a typo for 'layouts'. 'Mobile responsible' should be 'mobile responsive'. 'Might browsing' should be 'makes browsing'.

× Additionally, some sites now offer personally.

✓ Additionally, some sites now offer personalized features.

The word 'personally' is an adverb and does not fit here; the intended meaning is likely 'personalized' as an adjective describing features or services.

× In Vietnam, Tick Tock is extremely popular because it allows user to a block short videos that are entertaining and easy to watch.

✓ In Vietnam, TikTok is extremely popular because it allows users to upload short videos that are entertaining and easy to watch.

'User' should be plural 'users' to agree with 'allows'. 'A block' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'upload'. Also, the platform name is 'TikTok', not 'Tick Tock'.

× In addition Tick Tock, many people also visit knew website education platform to stay informed and learn new things.

✓ In addition to TikTok, many people also visit new educational websites to stay informed and learn new things.

'In addition Tick Tock' should be 'In addition to TikTok'. 'Knew' is a misspelling of 'new'. 'Website education platform' is awkward; 'educational websites' is more natural and plural to match 'many people'.