Websites— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: In English (Cambodia), you should try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. For example, use 'websites' instead of 'website' when plural, and avoid repeating 'English skill' multiple times. Also, try to use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I often visit many websites, but my favorite is an English learning website because it helps me improve my reading, listening, writing, and speaking skills. This is the best way for me to practice English effectively.

Sugestão: Try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar. For example, say 'English website' as 'an English learning website' and avoid repeating 'practice my English skill'. Use linking words like 'for example' correctly and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Exemplo: My favorite website is an English learning site called Lingo. I use it every day to practice and improve my English skills because I want to become better.

Sugestão: In English (Cambodia), try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. For example, say 'the websites I visit have changed because they are no longer free' instead of 'they would not allow us to be free'. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid repeating the same idea.

Exemplo: Yes, the websites I often visit have changed because they are no longer free. Now, I have to pay to use some features, which makes it difficult for me to visit them regularly.

Sugestão: Try to complete your sentences and use correct grammar. For example, say 'movie websites are popular because people want to entertain themselves during free time'. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' properly to make your answer clear and coherent.

Exemplo: I am not sure about all popular websites in my country, but I think movie websites are common because people use them to entertain themselves during their free time, making indoor activities more enjoyable.

× There are so many website that I often visit but one I like the most is English website because through English website I can enhance my English language which allow me to practice my reading skill, listening skill, writing skill and drama.

✓ There are so many websites that I often visit but one I like the most is an English website because through the English website I can enhance my English language which allows me to practice my reading skills, listening skills, writing skills and drama.

The word 'website' should be plural 'websites' because it refers to many. 'English website' needs an article 'an' before it. 'Allow' should be 'allows' to agree with singular subject 'English website'. Also, 'skill' should be plural 'skills' when listing multiple abilities.

× For example, every day I always practice on a website that called Lingo which allow me to practice my English skill to be better.

✓ For example, every day I always practice on a website that is called Lingo which allows me to practice my English skills to get better.

The verb 'allow' should be 'allows' to agree with the singular subject 'website'. Also, 'skill' should be plural 'skills' when referring to multiple abilities.

× Yes, that an interesting question. I would say the website that I often visit has changes because they would not allow us to be free.

✓ Yes, that is an interesting question. I would say the websites that I often visit have changed because they do not allow us to use them for free.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'that'. 'Website' should be plural 'websites' to match 'they'. 'Has changes' is incorrect; it should be 'have changed' to indicate change over time. 'Would not allow us to be free' is incorrect; it should be 'do not allow us to use them for free'.

× They show the app are not free for us.

✓ They show that the app is not free for us.

The sentence is missing the conjunction 'that' to connect clauses. 'App' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'.

× Well I don't know too much about the website that are popular in my country but I always think people usually use movie website because they want to entertain their self like for example in the free time they want to make their indoor activity more enjoyable so they.

✓ Well, I don't know too much about the websites that are popular in my country but I always think people usually use movie websites because they want to entertain themselves. For example, in their free time, they want to make their indoor activities more enjoyable.

'Website' should be plural 'websites' to match 'that are popular'. 'Movie website' should be plural 'movie websites'. 'Their self' is incorrect; it should be 'themselves'. The sentence is incomplete and needs to be finished properly for clarity.