Websites— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'keep connect' nên là 'keep connected'. Ngoài ra, bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'often'.

Exemplo: I often visit social media websites such as Facebook, Instagram, and Messenger because they help me stay connected with my friends and family. Additionally, when I have free time, I like to watch videos on YouTube to relax.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'a new friend' nên là 'new friends' hoặc 'a new friend'. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tránh lỗi như 'a YouTube'. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: My favorite website is Facebook because it allows me to learn many new things and sometimes helps me meet new friends from around the world. Besides that, I often use YouTube to relieve stress.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'hug change' nên là 'huge change'. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

Exemplo: In my opinion, there has been a huge change in the websites I visit. For example, Facebook was not popular in my country in the past, but now it is very common and almost all young people use it.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp số nhiều và số ít, ví dụ 'social medias' nên là 'social media'. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi như 'allow individuals learn' nên là 'allow individuals to learn'.

Exemplo: In my opinion, social media websites are very popular in my country because they allow people to meet many friends around the world and help individuals learn new things to improve their life skills.

× Of course, the kind of website I often visit is social medias like Facebook, Instagram or Messenger.

✓ Of course, the kind of websites I often visit are social media platforms like Facebook, Instagram, or Messenger.

The phrase 'social medias' is incorrect because 'media' is already plural; 'social media' is treated as a plural noun. Also, 'kind of website' should be plural 'kind of websites' to match the plural subject. The verb should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject.

× I always use the website because I want to keep connect with my friends and my family.

✓ I always use the website because I want to keep connecting with my friends and my family.

After 'keep', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'connect' should be 'connecting'.

× Sometimes when I have a free time, I often use a YouTube to.

✓ Sometimes when I have free time, I often use YouTube too.

'A free time' is incorrect; 'time' in this context is uncountable and should not have an article. Also, 'a YouTube' is incorrect because YouTube is a proper noun and does not need an article. 'To' should be 'too' to mean 'also'.

× Absolutely, My favorite website is Facebook because in here I tend to learn about many things and it's helped me meet a new friend around the world sometimes.

✓ Absolutely, my favorite website is Facebook because here I tend to learn about many things and it has helped me meet new friends around the world sometimes.

'In here' is incorrect; 'here' alone is sufficient. 'It's helped' should be 'it has helped' for clarity. 'A new friend' should be 'new friends' to match the plural context.

× I usually use a YouTube to reduce my stress.

✓ I usually use YouTube to reduce my stress.

'A YouTube' is incorrect because YouTube is a proper noun and does not require an article.

× In my opinion, I think is have a hug change to the website.

✓ In my opinion, I think there has been a huge change to the website.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb agreement. 'Is have' is incorrect; it should be 'there has been' to indicate existence and past change. 'Hug' is a typo for 'huge'.

× I often visit especially Facebook, because in the past Facebook is not popular in my country, but nowadays is very common and almost young people use it.

✓ I often visit Facebook especially, because in the past Facebook was not popular in my country, but nowadays it is very common and almost all young people use it.

'Is not' should be past tense 'was not' to match 'in the past'. 'Nowadays is' should be 'nowadays it is'. 'Almost young people' should be 'almost all young people'.

× In my opinion, the kinds of websites are popular in my country is social medias, because in social medias, people can meet a lot of friends around the world and allow individuals learn about new things to improve your life skill.

✓ In my opinion, the kinds of websites that are popular in my country are social media platforms, because on social media, people can meet a lot of friends around the world and it allows individuals to learn about new things to improve their life skills.

'Kinds of websites' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. 'Social medias' should be 'social media platforms'. 'In social medias' should be 'on social media'. 'Allow individuals learn' should be 'allows individuals to learn'. 'Your life skill' should be 'their life skills' to maintain pronoun agreement and plural form.