Websites— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to give a clear and direct answer to the question by naming the types of websites you visit, not just one website repeatedly. Use correct vocabulary and avoid confusing or unclear phrases. Also, keep your answer concise and relevant.

Exemplo: I often visit search engines like Google to find information quickly. Besides that, I also browse news websites to stay updated and social media platforms to connect with friends.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive. Try to add more specific reasons why you like the website and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Exemplo: My favourite website is Google because it helps me find answers to any question quickly and easily. Moreover, it offers various services like maps and news, which I use daily.

Sugestão: Try to provide more detailed and specific information about changes you have noticed or expect. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid vague statements.

Exemplo: I usually visit only a few websites, so I haven't noticed many changes. However, I think Google updates its layout occasionally to improve user experience.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but needs clearer structure and grammar. Try to organize your ideas better and use linking words to make your answer more fluent and natural.

Exemplo: In my country, governmental websites are very popular because people can submit applications and track their requests online. Additionally, university websites are widely used by students for information and resources.

× Google Engine is my best friend and the most website I visit so frequently.

✓ Google Engine is my best friend and the website I visit most frequently.

The phrase 'the most website' is incorrect because 'website' is singular and 'most' is used with plural or uncountable nouns. The correct form is 'the website I visit most frequently' to indicate frequency properly.

× Google has been my friend since long time.

✓ Google has been my friend for a long time.

The phrase 'since long time' is incorrect. 'Since' is used with a specific point in time, while 'for' is used with a duration. Here, 'for a long time' correctly expresses the duration.

× I rely on Mr. Go Girl answers a lot.

✓ I rely a lot on Mr. Go Girl's answers.

The original sentence lacks possessive form and has awkward word order. 'Mr. Go Girl's answers' shows possession, and placing 'a lot' after 'rely' improves clarity.

× It is unreliable.

✓ It is reliable.

The context suggests the student trusts Google, so 'unreliable' contradicts the meaning. Correcting to 'reliable' aligns with intended meaning.

× God, a friend and loyal friend.

✓ Google is a good and loyal friend.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'Google is' and correcting 'God' to 'Google' clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence.

× Google is the best website that I find answer to any question I have at any time.

✓ Google is the best website where I find answers to any question I have at any time.

The phrase 'that I find answer' is incorrect; 'where I find answers' is appropriate for referring to a place or source. Also, 'answers' should be plural to match 'any question'.

× Google has been my best friend since long time.

✓ Google has been my best friend for a long time.

Same as before, 'since long time' is incorrect; 'for a long time' correctly expresses duration.

× I don't visit many websites, thus I don't notice any difference between the past and now.

✓ I don't visit many websites, so I don't notice any difference between the past and now.

'Thus' is formal and less appropriate in spoken English here; 'so' is a better conjunction to show cause and effect.

× Google has been with the same layout and content since long time.

✓ Google has had the same layout and content for a long time.

'Has been with' is incorrect; 'has had' correctly indicates possession over time. Also, 'since long time' should be 'for a long time'.

× I don't see any new updates or differences.

✓ I don't see any new updates or differences.

This sentence is correct and needs no change.

× The governmental websites like the E government where people can submit electronically many applications and follow up the requests are people are also navigating through the university's websites.

✓ Governmental websites like the e-government, where people can electronically submit many applications and follow up on requests, are popular, and people also navigate through university websites.

The original sentence has plural and singular mismatches, awkward phrasing, and missing prepositions. Correcting 'E government' to 'e-government', adding commas, and fixing verb forms improves clarity and grammar.