ChallengesPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

What subject do you think is the most challenging at school?

Candidato

Well, I think the most challenging subject is the art subjects like a Chinese or English literature or other languages because it is not like the science subject that had a specific answer of the question. But it really depends on the examiner.

Examinador

Do you like to challenge yourself?

Candidato

Well, I think I'm the person that likes challenging. I want to try different things that I haven't done before and I want to see where's my limit, how the best that I can do. So I identify myself as the challenge people.

Examinador

Do you like to live a life that has a lot of challenges?

Candidato

I think I'm not a stable person, so I think I would love to live a life with many challenges because you only live once and it's very important to experience different challenge than you know how the world is interesting and know.

Examinador

How do you usually deal with challenges in daily life?

Candidato

I didn't have faced very serious challenges so far. So in general, when I face a small challenges that maybe I didn't met before, I just take out my and Google how people deal with it and I just copy that. And yeah.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

What subject do you think is the most challenging at school?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 回答中表达不够自然,句子结构较复杂且有语法错误,且缺少连贯的连接词。建议简化句子结构,使用更准确的词汇,并用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: I think subjects like Chinese or English literature are the most challenging because, unlike science, they don't have specific answers. Moreover, the difficulty can depend on the examiner's expectations.

Do you like to challenge yourself?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,且句子较长且不够连贯。建议使用简单句表达观点,并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

Exemplo: Yes, I like to challenge myself. I enjoy trying new things to discover my limits and see how well I can perform. Therefore, I consider myself a person who embraces challenges.

Do you like to live a life that has a lot of challenges?

Pontuação: 55.0

Sugestão: 回答表达不清晰,语法和用词错误较多,句子结构混乱。建议简化表达,明确观点,并使用恰当的连接词使句子连贯。

Exemplo: I prefer a life full of challenges because life is short. Facing different challenges helps me understand the world better and makes life more interesting.

How do you usually deal with challenges in daily life?

Pontuação: 50.0

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够自然且缺少细节。建议注意时态和单复数的正确使用,丰富细节,并用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: I haven't faced serious challenges yet. Usually, when I encounter small problems, I search online to see how others handle them and then try to follow their advice.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× Well, I think the most challenging subject is the art subjects like a Chinese or English literature or other languages because it is not like the science subject that had a specific answer of the question.

Well, I think the most challenging subjects are the art subjects like Chinese or English literature or other languages because they are not like the science subjects that have specific answers to the questions.

这里存在单复数不一致的问题。'subject'和'art subjects'混用,应该保持一致,且'Chinese'前不加冠词'a','science subject'应为复数'science subjects',因为指的是多个学科。建议保持主语和谓语的一致性,复数名词前不加冠词。

Past tense issue

× Well, I think the most challenging subject is the art subjects like a Chinese or English literature or other languages because it is not like the science subject that had a specific answer of the question.

Well, I think the most challenging subjects are the art subjects like Chinese or English literature or other languages because they are not like the science subjects that have specific answers to the questions.

句中使用了过去时'had',但描述的是普遍事实,应该用一般现在时'have'。时态错误会导致表达不准确。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Well, I think I'm the person that likes challenging.

Well, I think I'm the person who likes challenges.

'that'用于指人时,正式场合更常用'who'。另外,'likes challenging'表达不自然,应该用复数名词'challenges'。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I want to try different things that I haven't done before and I want to see where's my limit, how the best that I can do.

I want to try different things that I haven't done before and I want to see where my limit is, how best I can do.

'where's my limit'语序错误,疑问词引导的宾语从句中应为陈述语序。'how the best that I can do'结构不正确,应简化为'how best I can do'。

Singular and plural issue

× So I identify myself as the challenge people.

So I identify myself as a challenging person.

'challenge people'不符合语法,应该用形容词形式'challenging'修饰'person',且单数形式。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I think I'm not a stable person, so I think I would love to live a life with many challenges because you only live once and it's very important to experience different challenge than you know how the world is interesting and know.

I think I'm not a stable person, so I would love to live a life with many challenges because you only live once and it's very important to experience different challenges so that you know how interesting the world is.

'different challenge'应为复数'different challenges'。'than you know how the world is interesting and know'结构混乱,应改为' so that you know how interesting the world is'。

Past tense issue

× I didn't have faced very serious challenges so far.

I haven't faced very serious challenges so far.

'didn't have faced'是错误的过去时态表达,正确的现在完成时为'haven't faced',表示到目前为止的经历。

Singular and plural issue

× So in general, when I face a small challenges that maybe I didn't met before, I just take out my and Google how people deal with it and I just copy that.

So in general, when I face small challenges that I maybe haven't met before, I just take out my phone and Google how people deal with them and I just copy that.

'a small challenges'中'a'与复数'challenges'不匹配,应去掉'a'。'didn't met'时态错误,应为现在完成时'haven't met'。缺少名词'phone'。代词'it'应改为'them',与复数'challenges'一致。

Vocabulário

BestFinest; To the highest standard
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
InterestingAbsorbing
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
SmallLittle; Short; Slight; Inadequate; Foolish
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